【篇一:自考英语(二)作文写作通用模版】
自考英语(二)作文写作通用模版
1、利弊分析型作文模板:
思路:1、描述现象 2、介绍观点(第二段,利;第三段,弊)3、作者观点/结论
范例作文:网络,是新世纪的科技产物,也是新世纪的代名词。我们的前辈不会上网,懂得什么叫“伊妹儿”的人真可谓“凤毛麟角”。而今,如果你不懂网络,那你就会成为新世纪“盲人”。
请就网络对日常生活的影响发表你的看法。
at present, there is no doubt that network plays an increasingly important role in our lives . we are all aware that, like everything else, networks have both favorable and unfavorable aspects (have both advantages and disadvantages).
generally speaking, there are several main advantages of network. with the development of technology, a lot of information is gathered together through networks. information is shared and exchanged quickly. by accessing networks through various means, people truly realized to find the information they need everywhere on the networks from time to time. networks greatly facilitate the people’s live, work and entertainment. even people staying at home, work, shopping, entertainment, information retrieval and etc. can be completed through networks. however, just as every things has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of networks .due to the convenience and broad resource information of networks, some internet users on the network had a severe dependence, but ignored the real life. the emergence of online games, also makes some young people addicted to online games and neglected in the study. the emergence of hackers makes some confidential information stolen possibility.
weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of networks. we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of networks outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.
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at present, there is no doubt that
plays an increasingly important role in our lives .
we are all aware that, like everything else,
have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.
generally speaking, there are several main advantages of ?(介绍优点)
however, just as every coin has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of ?(介绍缺点) weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of . we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.
思路第一段,结合图表,将图表的信息描述清楚,点出主题
第二段,围绕主题展开讨论,分析原因
第三段,结合上段讨论,发表自己针对这种现象的评论,说明危害,重申自己观点
作文范例:
the chart gives us an overall picture of the changes in the ownership of houses. the first thing we notice is that state-owned houses’ ratio is diminishing and provite houses’ is increasing. this means that as time goes by, the proportion of occupied private houses is growing
we can see from the statistics given that state-owned house is 75% of total, which ratio was much higher than private houses’ in 1990. after 1990, the ratio on private house is increased as time. the figures also tells us that the increasing range on private house is much bigger in second 5 years than in first 5 years. in the second column of 2000, we can see that private house ratio accounts for 80% of total.
judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that private purchase of house becomes more and more. the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is that people’s income increases much more. it is high time that we should develop the economical housing construction to meet more private needs.
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the chart gives us an overall picture of the (图表主题). the first thing we notice is that_increasing(图表最大特点). this means that as (进一步说明).
we can see from the statistics given that _(图表细节一).
after ___(细节一中的第一个变化),
the (幅度+时间,紧跟着的变化). the figures also tells us that__(图表细节二). (数据位置,如in the second column), we can see that _ _____(进一步描述).
judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that_ (结论). the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is that_ (给出原因).it is high time that we (发出倡议).
思路 :同图表型作文模版。范例作文,根据下图写一篇160-200个单词的文章
1.解释它要表达的意思2.简单描述这幅图3.给出你的评论 注:火锅里的文字有:佛、功夫、解构、礼、毕昇、儒、后现代、老舍、莎士比亚、爱因斯坦、道、仁、天鹅湖、启蒙、京剧等
作文范例:
the picture showed us a boiling hotpot of various forms of both domestic and alien culture. thehodgepodge could be categorized as literature, moral values and performing arts.
as far as i am concerned, the picture characterizes the status quo of chinese society in which chinese and western culture conflict with each other but also merge into a unique form to a certain degree. in the highly-integrated world today, no country is an isolated island. every nation is faced with miscellaneous alien culture, roaring to overwhelm the domestic culture and china is no exception.
however, it does not mean the foreign culture shall be eliminated or eradicated. it is up to the option of the tasters of hotpot, or in other words, the chinese people to exact the essence of this combination, be it chinese or western, and to take full advantage of the world has in store for us.
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the picture showed us 。(揭示漫画的主题,再后面跟一句进一步说明一下)
as far as i am concerned, the picture
characterizes。(全面分析漫画主题,以及产生这种现象的原因)
however, it does not mean (提出你反对的观点)i think that.(提出你的观点)
4、对立观点型作文模版
思路 第一段:引言(引山讨论的主题(x),提出两种对立的观点(a和b),有时还可略提及支持这两种观点的理由)
第二段:正文(表明自己的看法,阐述自己支持某一观点的理由,或/和驳斥自己反对的观点)
第三段:结论(总结全文,重中自己的观点)
这种篇章结构的重点放在表达自己的观点上,更能充分地阐述自己的观点,使自己的观点更充实、更有说服力。
作文范例
directions: for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic do “lucky numbers” really bring good luck? you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in chinese) below: 1. 有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。 2. 也有些人认为数字与运气无关。 3. 试说明你的看法。
①when asked about lucky numbers, different people will offer different opinions. some people think that ② lucky numbers can bring good luck. they hold this view because ③they believe lucky numbers will help them fulfill their wishes - to be rich or successful. ④however, there are still many people who wont agree. they argue that ⑤ such kind of idea is only ignorant and superstitious belief. besides, ⑥they think numbers are just numbers and each number is equal in its importance.
⑦personally, i am on the side of the latter argument. for one thing, ⑧ numbers, including lucky numbers, are just a tool for counting, they dont have magic power. for another, ⑨whether we will have good luck or not depends on ourselves instead of lucky numbers, if we work hard and make good preparations, good luck will come to us. ⑩therefore, lucky numbers dont bring good luck. it is our hard work and good preparations that bring us good luck.
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⑧ therefore/in conclusion, .
5、解决问题型模版
思路 第一段:引言(提出需要解决的问题或遇到的困难)
第二段:正文(说明问题/困难的不同方面及如何一一解决)
第三段:结论(展望问题/困难解决的前景)
作文范例
directions: in this section you are required to write a composition on the topic “reduce waste on campus”. you should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given in chinese below:
1. 目前有些校园内浪费现象严重;2. 浪费的危害3. 从我做起,杜绝浪费。
reduce waste on campus
as is known to all, waste on campus has become a more and more serious problem. we can easily see many students dump a lot of food in the garbage can. some students spend thousands of yuan buying fashionable clothes and so on.
the negative effects of waste can be shown in the following aspects. in the first place, it makes some students dependent on their parents for money, which is harmful to their development. if they don’t learn to support themselves, they will be “useless people” when they graduate. in the second place, it is not easy for our parents to arrange for our schooling. last but not the least important, there is no denying the fact that our country is still poor. there are many people who cannot go to university and many poor people still need our help.as far as i am concerned, i should set a good example to reduce waste on campus. first of all, i will refrain from wasting anything, from food to stationery. what’s more, i’m determined to call on more schoolmates to fight against waste. only through these measures can we hope to reduce waste on campus.
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①nowadays/as is known to all/with , we/many people/students are facing/have to face(the problem of) .
②there are several different ways/channels to tackle/solve the problem. first,③. second,④ . ⑤ besides/furthermore,.
⑥as far as i am concerned/as to me,i prefer/choose to . ⑦ the reasons are as follows.for one thing,⑧ . for another,
⑨. ⑩and above all/most important of
all,.
⑾therefore,
【篇二:自考英语(二)作文写作通用模版】
自考英语(二)作文写作通用模版
1、利弊分析型作文模板:
思路:1、描述现象 2、介绍观点(第二段,利;第三段,弊)3、作者观点/结论
范例作文:网络,是新世纪的科技产物,也是新世纪的代名词。我们的前辈不会上网,懂得什么叫“伊妹儿”的人真可谓“凤毛麟角”。而今,如果你不懂网络,那你就会成为新世纪“盲人”。
请就网络对日常生活的影响发表你的看法。
at present, there is no doubt that network plays an
increasingly important role in our lives . we are all aware that, like everything else, networks have both favorable and
unfavorable aspects (have both advantages and disadvantages). generally speaking, there are several main advantages of network. with the development of technology, a lot of
information is gathered together through networks. information is shared and exchanged quickly. by accessing networks through various means, people truly realized to find the information they need everywhere on the networks from time to time. networks greatly facilitate the people’s live, work and entertainment. even people staying at home, work, shopping, entertainment, information retrieval and etc. can be completed through
networks.
however, just as every things has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of networks .due to the convenience and broad resource information of networks, some internet users on the network had a severe dependence, but ignored the real life. the emergence of online games, also makes some young people addicted to online games and neglected in the study. the emergence of hackers makes some confidential information stolen possibility.
weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of networks. we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of networks outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.
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at present, there is no doubt that plays an increasingly important role in our lives . we are all aware that, like everything
else,
have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.
generally speaking, there are several main advantages of ?
(介绍优点)
however, just as every coin has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of ?(介绍缺点)
weighing up the advantages and disadvantages
of . we are inclined to believe that the positive sides of outweigh its negative ones. therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.
2、图表型作文模版:
思路第一段,结合图表,将图表的信息描述清楚,点出主题
第二段,围绕主题展开讨论,分析原因
第三段,结合上段讨论,发表自己针对这种现象的评论,说明危害,重申自己观点
作文范例:
the chart gives us an overall picture of the changes in the ownership of houses. the first thing we notice is that state-owned houses’ ratio is diminishing and provite houses’ is increasing. this means that as time goes by, the proportion of occupied private houses is growing
we can see from the statistics given that state-owned house is 75% of total, which ratio was much higher than private houses’ in 1990. after 1990, the ratio on private house is increased as time. the figures also tells us that the increasing range on private house is much bigger in second 5 years than in first 5 years. in the second column of 2000, we can see that private house ratio accounts for 80% of total.
judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that private purchase of house becomes more and more. the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is that people’s income increases much more. it is high time that we should develop the economical housing construction to meet more private needs.
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the chart gives us an overall picture of
the (图表主题). the first thing we notice is that_increasing(图表最大特点). this means that as (进一步说明). we can see from the statistics given
that _(图表细节一).
after ___(细节一中的第一个变化),
the (幅度+时间,紧跟着的变化). the figures also tells us
that__(图表细节二). (数据位置,如in the second column), we can see that
_ _____(进一步描述).
judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that_ (结论). the reason for this, as far as i am concerned is
that_ (给出原因).it is high time that
we (发出倡议).
3、漫画型作文模版
思路 :同图表型作文模版。范例作文,根据下图写一篇160-200个单词的文章
1.解释它要表达的意思2.简单描述这幅图3.给出你的评论 注:火锅里的文字有:佛、功夫、解构、礼、毕昇、儒、后现代、老舍、莎士比亚、爱因斯坦、道、仁、天鹅湖、启蒙、京剧等
作文范例:
the picture showed us a boiling hotpot of various forms of both domestic and alien culture. thehodgepodge could be
【篇三:英语-2-写作范文】
英语2:写作范文
how to be a good learner?
as a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. we need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. after class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. it’s good to study in groups and help each other.
as a student, working hard is important, but do more reading in our free time. if we have any problems, we’d better ask others for help.
i hope all these will be helpful to us.
点评:句子较完整,能简单介绍学习方法,但方法过于简单,缺乏自己的独特的学习方法。语法上无大错,仅有个别小错误。
************************************************************************************************ dear tony:
i’m glad to know that you are going to learn chinese. i will give some advice.
learning chinese can be really fan. first, you should write the new words in groups and read them every day. you can remember all the words by doing this. second, it’s a good way to improve your listening. third, do you like reading? if you like, try to read chinese newspaper and magazines and pay attention to the sentences. or you can just read for fun. last, what about going to the chinese corner in your school? it’s very interesting to talk to chinese people. if you do that, you’ll be able to learn chinese well. i think this is helpful for you.
e-mail me if you have any other questions.
点评:层次较清晰,语言流畅,但学习方法过于老套,有所重复。
women in the modern world
women are playing an increasing important part in society today. in many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. we can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. women are no longer looked down upon by society.
with the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. husband and wife are now equal in family. they cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinner, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.
in spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. a number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. that’s really the problems was should solve immediately.
点评:切题。论证充分,有说服力;论证手段丰富(举证、正反)表达思想清楚‘语言流畅,词汇丰富,连贯性好。其本上无大的语言错误,仅有个别小错误。
direction: you are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “the advantage and disadvantage of the internet.” you should base your composition on the following outline:
(1) 互联网的好处
(2) 互联网产生的问题
(3) 我的看法
the advantage and disadvantage of the internet
internet plays an important role in life. when you surf the net, the world become a smaller place. people can discuss about different topics and make friends with others. what’s more, they can work, play, and even have meetings on the net. internet is indeed one of the most wonderful things man has ever invented.
but just like most other inventions, the internet has its problems. some people are just over-enthusiastic to offer worthless information. official also find it hard to prevent invasion of criminals online. and sometimes bad information on the net does great harm to teenagers.
there is no doubt that the internet has changed our lives. however, we should use it properly and scientifically. also, the internet will serve us better if strict administration is applied.
范文点评:此文紧紧围绕提纲中的关键词---好处和问题----对互联网的利弊进行了讨论。
三段文字分别对应了提纲中的三个要点,并且每段的首句明确点明了该段的主题,中心明确,结构紧凑。文中句式有变化,显得活泼生动。
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direction: you are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “wealth and health”
you should have your composition on the following outlines.
(1) 有人认为财富意味着一切。
(2) 实际上健康比财富更重要。
(3) 是比较说明。
wealth and health
when asked what the aim of their life is, the vast majority of people say “making money”. for one thing, wealth can ensure them comfortable life.
however, as far as i am concerned, if i had to choose wealth and health, i would prefer health. on the one hand, rich people can afford everything they dream of. but sometimes wealth cannot buy health. on the other hand, people who are healthy but not wealthy can make money through their own efforts and can enjoy the fruit of their labor.
in conclusion, health is more important than wealth. those who are rich but are not healthy, are actually suffering.
点评: 本文紧扣提纲展开论述。观点明确,条例清晰,用词较准确。
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direction: you are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “what does friendship mean?”
you should have your composition on the following outlines.
(1) 友谊是人生永恒的主题。
(2) 友谊到底意味着什么。
(3) 友谊的重要性。
what does friendship mean?
what does friendship mean? there is no definite answer. as on eternal theme in literature, friendship is indispensable to daily life.
friendship is as important to our life as what salt is to dasher. when you are happy, friendship is like adding flowers to carpet; when you are sad, having friends are a consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you are facing difficulties, you can turn to friends for help. we admire the great friendship between marx and engel, which drew them together and pushed them on the road to exploring and fulfilling communism.
friendship is not almighty, but no one can live happily without it.
点评:本文类似抒情式的议论文,第二段中运用了排比句,并巧妙地运用恩格斯和马克思的例子来证明友谊的重要性。
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a person i will never forget
the person i will never forget is miss wang, my junior english teacher. she was tall and nice with long hair. she is also active because she is fond of playing tennis, traveling and listening to music. in addition, miss wang is kind and responsibility. at first, no matter how hard i tried, i couldn’t do well in english. it was miss wang who gave me a hand in time. and my english has improved a lot now.
how lucky, i a
m to be a student of miss wang.
点评:文章开门见山,点奔主题,利用题目,完成主题的导入。文中使用了定语从句、原因状语从句和强调句等复合句使文章更显其魅力。最后作者用感叹句总结,给全文划上了一个的句号。
本文作者采用了“总---分—总”的写作方法,层次清晰,要点全面,发挥的合情合理。 as is known to everyone, health is very important to us. all of us realize we should keep health and we will live longer and better. the following tips will help you a lot. first, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. you should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. don’t stay up! second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. it is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. my idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food. third, start doing some exercise every day. i’m sure physical exercise does a lot for a person’s health. and the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and don’t lose your temper at any time. 点评: 本文是一个常谈话题,讲到保持健康的重要性和方法,作者从自身的角度给大家一些保持健康的建议。 名词性的从句和定语从句的恰当运用让整篇文章如行云流水般流畅自如。一些词汇、短语的运用也非常到位,整篇文章能很好地围绕中心思想,条理清楚,行文流畅,紧扣主题。
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1)as is known to everyone, health is very important to us. all of us realize we should keep healthy and we will live longer and better. the following tips will help you a lot.
first, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. you should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. don’t stay up!
second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. it is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. my idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food.
third, start doing some exercise every day. i’m sure physical exercise does a lot for a person’s health. and the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and don’t lose your temper at any time.
2) mr. black will go to beijing by plane at ten thirty on monday morning. then he will visit the great wall and go to wang fujing to do some shopping from tuesday to wednesday. he is going to fly to hainan island at eight forty on thursday morning. he will go to visit “tianya hiajiao” and go scuba diving in sanya from friday to saturday morning. at 4:50 on saturday afternoon, he will fly back to beijing. then he will fly back home at about 3:20 on sunday afternoon.
3) i love my hometown
xuzhou city is my hometown. it lies in the north of jiangsu with a popular of over 5 million. in the past, it was poor and dirty. most of the people here lived a hard life. but great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. it has wide roads. on both sides are many tall buildings. you can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. the people’s living conditions have improved a lot. i’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful. i love my hometown.
4) no breakfast, no good
now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast. but not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.
and at our age, it is time for us to grow up. so our bodies are in great need of energy. if we don’t have breakfast, there will be not enough energy. this may affect our growth.
what’s more, it is a long time between breakfast and lunch. breakfast provides us with the energy our body needs. without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes. so, we must have breakfast.
5) computers
computers are wonderful machines. they can store large amounts of information and never forget it. they can process problems quickly and also provide information quickly. computers can’t think, but they can do things that human beings cannot do. it is very important tool in every office and in every home, so they are very useful. more and more people are getting interested in them these years. we should learn how to use computers now. then we will get ready for the future.
6) internet shopping is a new way of shopping. it offers a lot of advantages. the most important one is convenience. you can shop whenever you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. secondly it is often cheaper to buy goods through the internet and it is also easy to find want you are looking for.
there are some disadvantages, too. you cannot see the products or check their quality. besides you cannot enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.
7)
hr manager
simson company
120 lingling road
shanghai 200040
10 march 2008
dear sir,
i would like to apply for the position advertised in yesterday’s china daily.
i was born in 1987 and graduated from the college with a b. a in general business.
i have been handling most of the bookkeeping for the past three years and i trust i am qualified to fill your position.
i am enclosing a brief resume of my life history as you requested. please send any application forms that you want to fill out and let me know if you want an interview.
i look forward to hearing from you and appreciate your consideration of my application.
yours faithfully
chang ming
dear sirs,
i am applying for the position of administrative assistant you have advertised in the people’s daily.i enclose my cv and hope to hear from you shortly.
yours faithfully
ma jun
8 my hometown
my hometown is a beautiful place. it stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and wheat.
in the old days, it was a poor and backward little town. many people had no work and they lived a hard life.now great changes have taken place in my hometown, as china’s reform and opening up, people found a lot of ways of making money. now many people live in a beautiful and spacious house. with a lot of wide and clean, new-built roads, people can take buses or drive their own cars to work. more and more people have cell phones and personal computers and they are living happy lives.
the living condition in my hometown has improved a lot and my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. i am proud of my hometown.