
如何开篇:
技巧一:主旨设问更给力
I think it’s very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it’s good for our health and study.
I think it’s very important for us to protect environment. Why? Because it’s good for living.
I think it’s very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it’s the most-widely used language in the world.
技巧二:头文字D----从D开始,从我们到我
Different people have different _____, but/and I have/prefer ______.
如何写正文:
一.句型变化
1.扩张
扩张原则1:表达观点要“自我”
In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects!
扩张原则2:两句之间要过渡
I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day.
2.变形
变形原则1:总结的描述转感叹。
To keep a good sleep is very important.
How important it is to keep a good sleep!
变形原则2:符合倒装咱就倒
I didn’t go to bed until the homework was finished.
Not until the homework was finished did I go to bed.
变形原则3:凡是问题阐述用形容词句型!!
普通级句型The environment is bad.
比较级句型 The environment is getting much worse than before.
The environment is getting worse and worse
最高级句型 I have never seen the worse environment .
变形原则4: 有形容词有结果,用so…that…
He was so happy that he wanted to buy a gift for me.
She was so nice and kind that she never punished us in class.
变形原则5:表达作用多用it句式 …is a …way to…
阅读能帮助我放松自己。Reading is a good way to relax myself.
看电影能帮助我们学习英语。Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.
变形原则6:增强情感转感叹
阅读对我们很有益. How beneficial it is for us to read.
作运动对学生很重要. How important it is for students to do sports.
变形原则7:事情到感情句型It makes sb. feel … that …
I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.
It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.
变形原则8:形容词句型升级:it is one of the most …
It was an unusual experience in my life.
It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.
变形原则9:事情到感情句型2: …. As a result, …
I used to get a C in English, and it made me upset.
I used to get a C in English. As a result, I felt upset.
变形原则10:动作瞬间转延续–have/has done…since…
When I was 7 years old, I became interested in reading.
I have been interested in reading since I was 7 years old.
变形原则11:表达作用多用it句式– it is a …way to…
Firstly, reading can help me relax myself.
Firstly, it is a good way to relax myself.
变形原则12:活用there be结合定从:
Many reasons made me like reading.
There are many reasons why I enjoy reading.
变形原则13:解释内容用同位 万能句型—我爱者他人BS之
The fact that… makes me disappointed/sad/unhappy…
A lot of people don’t realize how important reading is.
The fact makes me disappointed.
The fact that a lot of people don’t realize how important reading is makes me disappointed.
二.句子整合
1.合并
In my opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects!
合并原则1:名词重复用定从。(没重复制造重复!)
The environment problem becomes more and more serious.
Man is now facing a big problem which is becoming more and more serious.
The air is polluted.
The air which used to be very fresh is much polluted now.
合并原则2:逻辑联系加连词。(没逻辑硬来逻辑)
The rivers are dirty, too. They have been polluted.
People always throw rubbish into the rivers, as a result, the rivers smell very bad.
We can see rubbish everywhere.
We can see rubbish everywhere even (especially) in public places.
合并原则3: 成分重叠,有序合并
I like going to library with my friends
I like going to library on Sunday
----I like going to library with my friends on Sunday.
Studying English can help us communicate with foreigners.
We can communicate with foreigners by writing business mails.
----Studying English can help us communicate with foreigners by writing business mails well.
列举式结构
first of all,
secondly,
besides,
what's more,
last but not least,
For one thing,
For another,
三 . 词汇变化
变化原则1:make 更有feel
After doing sports, I feel relaxed.
It makes me feel relaxed to do sports.
I made a progress in English. I feel proud.
It makes me feel proud to make a progress in English.
变化原则2:连词不再用and
增补 not only…but also…, as well as…
进阶 what’s more/worse , furthermore
转折 while, however
变化原则3:喜欢不再like-- be fond of, enjoy, be crazy about
I am fond of reading books.
变化原则4:凡是提出措施咱尽量不用should!!
“suppose” 、“had better”,“have no choice but ”, “it’s our duty to ”
如何结尾?
1.各种号召--事不宜迟
Don’t put it off.
2.各种越--多多益善
the+比较级+主谓,the +比较级+主谓
The better we take care of the environment,
the more beautiful the world will be.
3.名言警句
学习类
Practice makes perfect.
运动类
Rome was not built in a day.
环保类
Nothing is impossible to a willing mind .
爱好类
Interest is the best teacher.
没有? 编呗!
Once there was a great man said“……”.
议论文结构
开头方式:
In my opinion, we, students, are supposed to take more after-class activities!
议点阐述:
There are many reasons why I support it! (列举式)
总结陈述:
Above all, it is so obvious that we ... (强调主题!)
