
一、双减
1.假如你是李华,你收到外国朋友 Peter 的邮件,他一直对国内“双减”很感兴趣,想了解“双减”给你的学习和生活带来哪些影响。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.“双减”指什么;2.有什么影响;3. 你的感受。
参考词汇:“双减” Double reduction policy
学业负担 homework burden
校外培训 after-school training
注意:1.词数 80-100;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考例文:
Dear Peter,
I’m so glad to hear from you. The “Double reduction” policy refers to reducing the heavy homework burden and after-campus training for students in compulsory education.
After the implementation of the “double reduction” policy, we have less homework, more outdoor activities, and no longer need to attend classes in training institutions. There are also fewer tests in school. We no longer suffer from tests and grades. On weekends, we can do some things we like. Life is much easier and happier than before. However, we still have to deal with the new challenge of how to make the best of our time after school. About this point, I am thinking about it. Do you have any good ideas?
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据所给的提示,从三方面给Peter回一封邮件,向他介绍“双减”是什么,实施后给你的生活和学习带来了哪些影响,以及你的感受。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称和第三人称来行文。时态用一般现在时,写作时保持主谓一致性,在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。
二、家庭作业量与睡眠管理
2.教育部近日印发通知,要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量,合理布置不同类型的作业。为此,某英文杂志社正在开展以 “My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。
要求:1. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:1. 做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获……);
2. 更多有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由……);
3. ……
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develop.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据所给的参考信息以 “My Creative English Homework”为题写一篇征文,从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业,并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导:审题可知,本文写自身经历时用一般过去时,提建议时可采用一般现在时,人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出,第一段点题;第二段写自身经历,第三段提出建议;第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩,如:not only...but also...,It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺,条理清晰,文中无单词和语法上的错误。
三、课后延时服务
3.学校每周将开展与“体美育”相关的课外活动。请你从下表中选择1~2个活动,然后用英语写一篇短文说明你的选择意向以及理由,并分享在学校的英语网站上。
| The activity/activities you’d like to choose | The reasons why you choose it/them | ||
| Painting Singing | Ball games Sports dancing | Planting vegetables and flowers | 1. relax oneself 2. improve skills … |
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
3.词数:80~100;
4.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
Our school will hold different after-school activities. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible version:
Our school will hold different after-school activities. I do expect to join one of them.
I love sports, especially basketball, so the activity of “ball game” is my first choice. I think there must be more coaches and players, so if I join the activity, it will be a great chance to improve my basketball skills. Also, I’m outgoing and always hope to make friends with those basketball lovers. We can play together and learn from each other. Another reason is that we students need rest after a long time of studying. To me, playing basketball no doubt is the best way.
Therefore, the idea of holding the activity sounds wonderful. I can’t wait.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:本题要求从表格的五个课外活动中选取1-2个你想参加的活动写一篇英语短文,内容包括你的选择意向以及选择的理由。
2. 写作指导:因为本文主要以描述和表达观点为主,所以时态主要采用一般现在时;写作时可选其一或其二的活动,选其一的话,为达到题目的字数要求可增加理由的数量也可对单一的理由进行更加详细地陈述;理由的陈述可参考表格的提示也可适当地自我发挥;写作完成后应保证文章内容齐全,行文流畅,语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
四、加强体育教育
4.各地纷纷在中考中全面组织实施初中毕业生升学体育考试,并且体育成绩在学生中考成绩中占有的分量。中考体育考试已经结束,但是我们体育的锻炼还应该继续。请你以中考体育考试备考经历写一篇短文。
1.写作要点提示:
1)你的中考体育考试发挥的怎样?什么做得好、什么还要努力?2)你平时是怎样锻炼、克服困难的?3)你的感受和对此的今后打算?
2)写作要求:
短文的内容应包含所提示的要点。语言要流畅。可围绕提示要点适当增加情节,以使短文的意思连贯;短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;短文的词数在90词左右。
参考词汇:体育中考senior high school entrance examination of P.E.跳绳rope skipping
躯体前伸Body front
【答案】As a middle school student,we have to take a final exam to get the offer into high school.Within it,we need to take PE test.No matter what do you think about it ,I have to say,it's really a hard work. In order to pass the PE test,I have prepared for quite a long time.I get up early everyday to have more time to do exercise.Every morning,I get up at 5:30,before I have my breakfast,I need to do a lot of sports.such as running,rope skipping and Body front so on.All in all,to pass the exam,I have try my best.Actually I think it's also good for my health to do some exercise.Therefore,also it is not a easy thing to carry on,I will try my best.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇短文主要是体育成绩在学生中考成绩中占有的分量。中考体育考试已经结束,但是我们体育的锻炼还应该继续。注意文中使用的人称和动词的语态。
写作亮点:这篇短文介绍了中考体育的重要性,建议学生们平时应该加强锻炼。用到一些好的语句如:No matter what do you think about it ,I have to say,it's really a hard work;I think it's also good for my health to do some exercise给文章增色不少。
考点:提纲类作文。
五、加强艺术教育
5.假定你是赵平,请根据下面的海报内容给你的外教Mr. Hunt写封电子邮件,邀请他来参加你校举办的中国传统艺术展,并介绍相关传统艺术。
中国传统艺术展
时间:11月12日周四下午六点
活动内容:
1. 剪纸作品展览
2. 风筝作品展览
| 地点:学校六楼会议室(上楼梯后右转第二个教室) |
1. 词数: 100词左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 中国传统艺术展 traditional Chinese art exhibition
Dear Mr. Hunt,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhao Ping
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Hunt,
There will be a traditional Chinese art exhibition at 6 p.m. on Thursday, November 12. It will be in the school conference room on the sixth floor (go up the stairs and turn right to the second classroom). I would like to ask you whether you will have time to attend it.
There are mainly two parts of the exhibition, paper-cutting exhibition and kites exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of the most popular folk arts in China. Paper-cutting is commonly used for religion or decoration. Kites were used to convey information and for other military needs. But now they are becoming toys for leisure and entertainment.
I hope you will accept my invitation. I'm sure the exhibition will leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhao Ping
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容给外教Mr. Hunt写封邮件,邀请他来参加中国传统艺术展,并介绍相关传统艺术。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段发出邀请;第二段详细介绍剪纸作品展览和风筝作品展览;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
六、研学旅行
6.自2016年国家教育部发布《关于推进中小学生研学旅行的意见》以来,各地中小学开展了丰富多彩的研学旅行活动。请通过下面的图表信息,以 “Study Trip” 为题来阐述研学旅行的意义和可能遇到的困难。
要求:1. 词数80—100;
2. 请先阐述图表信息,再根据实际情况写出你的观点,做适当发挥;
3. 文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
4. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文:
Study Trip
I think study trip is a good way for students to study. When the students have a study trip, they can make friends with people from different regions. During the study trip, they can open their eyes and learn many things that they can’t learn at school. They can develop their independence. It is also a good way to relax and keep healthy.
But there are many difficulties to face. It increases the financial burden on families. Some parents think it is a waste of studying time. It may also cause some security problems. Some students are not used to life outside.
【详解】
1.题干解读:阅读题干可知,要求以“Study Trip”为题来阐述研学旅行的意义和可能遇到的困难。写作前,可以提前列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等;写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式,同时注意不要漏点,根据图表提示内容逐一书写,也可以适当地添加内容,使文章内容更加丰富;写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导:这是一篇材料型作文,时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主,注意谓语动词的三单形式。写作可以采取两段式的写作方式,第一段写研学旅行研学旅行的意义;第二段写研学旅行可能遇到的困难。
七、心理健康
7.公众健康日(7月7日),旨在倡导“全民健康,快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高,健康越来越受到重视。你们准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动,请你根据下面内容,准备一篇题为How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。
| How to live a healthy and happy life | |
| 健康包括身体(physical)健康和心理(mental)健康。 | |
| 身体健康 | 1. 健康饮食; 2. 适当锻炼; 3. 充足睡眠。 |
| 心理健康 | 1. 积极乐观; 2. 与人为善; 3.……(至少一点) |
| 希望 | ……(至少一点) |
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear and classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】
1.题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们以How to live a healthy and happy life为题写一篇文章,发表一下自己对“健康”这一话题的看法。题目中用表格列出了文章应包括的内容:首先介绍健康的分类;然后分别介绍如何保持身体健康和心理健康;最后提出自己的希望。学生们可以联系自己的日常生活,根据表格中的提示,再增加一些细节信息,用正确的英语进行表达。
2.写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称为主叙述。写作时应主语:首先文章要点全面,应包括题目中列出的所有要点,并对心理健康和希望进行补充。其次应注意英语句式结构的特点以及与汉语表达方式的不同,使用正确的词汇和句型,以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句和其他句式的使用,提升文章档次。最后应注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
八、劳动教育
8.国家提出了将劳动教育(labor education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此,你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育发起征文。请你以 “Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School”为题,写一篇短文参赛。
要求:
1.词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1.劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……);
2.校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……);
3.……
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It’s reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it’s important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What’s more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,写出自己对开设劳动教育的课程的意见以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育给出相应的建议,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作,时态以一般现在时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
九、手机进校园
9.现在很多同学使用智能手机(smart phone)。智能手机给我们学习生活带来便利的同时, 也产生许多不好的影响。比如我们身边越来越多的同学成了“低头族”(phubbers)。假如你 是李华, 你校的《英语园地》正在征文。请你投稿,谈谈你对智能手机的看法以及你是如何 正确使用智能手机的。
提示词语:advantages, convenient, proper, study
提示问题:
What do you think of smart phones?
What do you do with your own smart phone?
Refuse to be phubbers
More and more people are using smart-phones nowadays.
【答案】例文
Refuse to be phubbers
More and more people are using smart phones. Smartphones are helpful to our lives. We can use them to read news, shop online and so on .It is very useful and convenient. In fact, smartphones make our life colorful.
However, every coin has two sides. Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. It has caused bad effects on us. Phubbers can be seen here and there. One Sunday morning, I was looking at my smartphone while walking. A car nearly hit me. How terrible! I won't do it any more.
So I think we should use our smartphones properly and don't use them too much. We should pay more attention to our schoolwork. I will use my smart phone wisely and try not to be phubbers.
【详解】
题干分析:阅读题干,要求谈谈对智能手机的看法以及是如何正确使用智能手机的。智能手机给我们学习生活带来便利的同时,也会产生许多不好的影响。所以在写作文时,我们不仅要写出弊也要写出利,同时要表达自己观点。
例文点评:例文采取的是三段式写作手法,第一段首先阐述了目前的使用手机的状况,点明使用手机有利有弊,第二段重点写使用手机造成的坏处;最后写自己的观点及看法。例文中运用的是一般现在时为主,同时使用一些亮点词句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
高分亮点:
短语:be helpful to对……有帮助;here and there到处;not any more不再;pay more attention to注意;try to do sth努力做某事。
句型:(1)In fact,smartphones make our life colorful.事实上,智能手机让我们的生活丰富多彩。in fact事实上, make +n.+adj. make our life colorful让我们的生活丰富多彩;(2)Sometimes some of us spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.有时我们中一些人花太多时间在智能手机上玩游戏,考试结果很糟糕。and连接两个并列谓语,spend some time doing sth 花时间做某事。
十、习惯养成教育
10.
对于所有的学生,尤其是作为初三学生的我们而言,养成良好的学习习惯尤为重要。它不仅能帮助我们提高学习成绩,还能够培养我们的自主学习能力和创新精神。请你以“Good Learning Habits Lead Us to Success”为题写一篇短文,号召同学们养成良好的学习习惯。
要求:
1. 80—120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级和学校的名称。
参考要点:
1. 养成良好学习习惯的重要意义(提高成绩,培养自主学习能力……)
2. 分享几种好的学习习惯(完成作业,上课积极发言……)
3. 如何养成良好学习习惯(寻求老师帮助,持之以恒……)
4. ……
Good Learning Habits Lead Us to Success
As we all know, the best way to study well is by developing good learning habits. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Good Learning Habits Lead Us to Success
As we all know, the best way to study well is by developing good learning habits. It is very important for us. Because it can improve our grades and cultivate autonomous learning ability.
There are some good ways to develop good learning habits. First, we should finish our homework independently. Second, we should listen to the teachers and answer questions actively in class. Finally, we had better do more reading every day.
How do we develop good learning habits? The best way is to ask teacher for help and keep doing it. If you develop good learning habits, you will success in the future.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文要求以“Good Learning Habits Lead Us to Success”为题,根据要求和参考要点提示,写一篇英语短文,开头已给出,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文是围绕好的学习习惯对我们的成功的影响展开论述,故本文以第一人称为主,时态为一般现在时为主,主要是给方法、提建议,故要结合实际,要合情合理、逻辑通顺、叙述完整。
十一、食品安全
11.健康的生活习惯一直是人们关注的话题,针对班上同学的饮食习惯老师准备开展有关健康饮食的重要性的主题班会课。请以Good Living Habits为主题,写一篇发言稿,谈谈如何做到健康饮食以及健康的生活习惯的重要性。
提示:1、拥有健康的生活习惯对我们很重要;
2、现在很多学生经常熬夜,吃很多垃圾食品;
3、我们应该早睡早起、多运动;
4、我们应该多吃健康食物;
5、如果你想拥有健康的身体,你就必须有健康的生活方式。
要求:1.要点齐全,并补充适当的细节;
2.语言通顺,表达清楚,书写规范;
3.词数:80词左右,可适当发挥。
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【答案】One possible version:
Good Living Habits
Hello, everyone, let’s talk about living habits. It is important for us to have good living habits. Nowadays, many students often stay up late, they hardly do sports and they often eat a lot of junk food. I think we should go to bed early and get up early, we should eat more healthy food and exercise more. If you want to be healthy, you must have healthy life styles. Without good living habits, there is no healthy body and mind.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本篇属于材料作文,谈论健康生活习惯的重要性以及如何做到健康饮食。开篇点题,说明好的生活习惯很重要;然后谈论许多学生的坏习惯以及为了养成好习惯我们应该怎么做;最后点题,要有一个好的生活习惯,没有好的生活习惯就不会有健康的身体和头脑。
2.写作指导:全文主体时态为一般现在时,针对所给要点具体阐述,切记不要遗漏要点,可以适当增加情节使行文连贯。写作时尽量多使用所学过的单词、短语以及句型使文章出彩,如let's do, nowasays, do sports, more, without, there be以及it is adj. for sb. to do sth.等。
十二、保护视力
12.最近,你们学校就学生的健康状况做了问卷调查,下面是调查中发现的主要问题及其成因。请你根据表格中的要点提示用英文写一篇短文,对此次问卷调查的结果加以说明。要点:
| 问题 | 成因 | 建议 |
| 压力大(50%) | 考试、升学压力;没有足够的时间做自己喜欢的事情 | 合理安排时间,找时间放松 |
| 眼睛近视(65%) | 学习习惯不好, 看电子产品太多 | …… |
| 变胖(8%) | …… | …… |
1.80个词左右。
2.必须包括以上全部要点,可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,观点正确,书写规范。
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【答案】例文:
Recently, our school has done a survey about the students’ health. Here are the main problems.
50 percent of the students are under too much pressure. They have too many exams to take and too much homework to do and don’t have enough time to do what they enjoy doing. I think they need to find time to relax themselves and try to make a balance between study and rest. 65 percent of the students watch too much TV in their daily lives, and they also don’t have good study habits, so they are short-sighted. I think they should do homework or read books in a correct way and spend less time on TV or cellphones. What’s more, 8 percent of the students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly do exercise. In my opinion, it’s better for them to have more healthy food and do exercise every day.
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,根据表格中的要点提示用英文写一篇短文,对学生健康问卷调查的结果加以说明。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主;分2段陈述。第一段点题介绍学生的健康问题;第二段详细介绍学生的健康问题,成因以及建议。可自由发挥,保证叙述完整,条理清晰。
