读后续写大部分是围绕conflict,solution来运转的，首先读懂材料，这一步若完不成，就不能往下进行了，然后你需要找出文章到底提出了什么冲突或问题，按照以下“八步”开始续写，轻松确定框架，高分唾手可得。
注意：这八步并不是固定的，可以不按这个顺序，也可以省略一些环节。
八步成文
1. 情绪：情绪描写- & 2. 细节：进一步解释描写
3. 转折：个人努力或借助外界
4. 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
5. 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题
6. 想法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
7. 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
8. 总结：点题，呼应前文
20+分的读后续写“自由八股文”的手把手示范
例子：
（2016年10月，浙江高考）
夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次援救但没有看见她，她感到很失望。
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
| 续写 | 八股文思路 |
| 1. A wave of terror swept over her. | （情绪） |
| 2. Her heart pounding fiercely and her palms sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. | （细节详述情绪） |
| 3. Tired and terrified as she was, Jane plucked her courage to feel the way. | （转折：个人努力） |
| 4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before she found a cave. 5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herself, “Tomorrow is another day.” | （转机：成功，希望来了） |
| 6. With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company. | （衔接句） |
| 1. Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead, at a loss what to do. | (主要问题) |
| 2. It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. | （突然有了办法） |
| 3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can’t wait to set off. | （开始做） |
| 4. After what seemed a century, such an area did come into sight. | （成功了） |
| 5. Her face brightened up. | （感受） |
| 6. What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her. | （结果解决问题：无巧不成书，欢喜） |
| 7. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart. | |
| 8. It was at that moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.
| （总结） |
父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
| 续写 | 八股文思路 |
| 1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy. | （情绪） |
| 2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down. | （细节详述） |
| 3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns. | （转折：个人努力） |
| 4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse. | （转机：成功，希望来了） |
| 5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping for air. | （衔接句：新问题来了） |
| 6. “Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face. |
| 1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain. | (努力，失败) |
| 2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby. | （突然有了办法） |
| 3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last. | （开始做） |
| 4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight. | （成功了） |
| 5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine. | （感受） |
| 6. Upon our arrival, Uncle Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been? I am just calling 911.” | （幽默对话） |
| 7. “To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin. | |
| 8. What an unforgettable experience we had! | (总结) |
Looking after thousands of turtles, day after day, was no easy task.
1. From morning to night, turtles fed, water changed and floor mopped, Albert felt extremely exhausted, as if on the verge of collapsing. （感受：疲劳）
2. Reduced to being home the whole day, he plucked up courage to face the fact，often close to tears.
3. Now, even a glance of his book became a luxury. （详细描述感受）
4. “Poor boy, you can find a way out in time,” sighed his parents, patting him on the shoulder and leaving.
5. Albert had no idea what to do. However, one day, he found a strange thing and felt a ray of hope. （问题的解决方法：外界的力量）
6. With decreasing time on computer games was the number of turtles also in decline. （衔接句）
When Albert forgot about his beloved computer games, the turtles disappeared.
1. He even couldn’t be bothered to ask the reason.
2. Now his curiosity gave way to his excitement as if he was relieved of a huge burden.（感受）
3. More relieved than shocked were his parents who hugged him tightly，trembling with delight and urged him to go out.（父母的感受）
4. After what seemed a century, he couldn’t wait to open the door, a ray of warm sunshine flooding in. （主人公的解决问题方法：回归现实）
5. His face lit up.（想法）
6. “The doorway to my world is to embrace the real world, isn’t it?” he winked at his parents, grinning from ear to ear. （结尾呼应手段点题）
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