写作技巧
⏹ 三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是:学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始?请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
一些同学认为 | 另一些同学认为 |
1.应从儿童时期开始学习英语2.儿童时期记忆力好,可以记 住很多单词 3.能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础 | 1.不应从儿童时期开始学习英语 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要 学英语,易混淆 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习 |
讨论未取得一致意见 |
2.词数:100左右(不包括已给的起始句);
3.参考词汇:基础 — foundation
汉语拼音— Chinese pinyin
⏹ 审 题
⏹文 体:
⏹时 态:
⏹内容要点:
⏹介绍讨论的主题(开头句):
⏹我们举行了一场讨论,讨论内容是学生是否可以……
We had a discussion about whether students should be allowed to …
⏹我们已经作了一个调查,调查内容是学生是否可以……
We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to …
⏹我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论,讨论内容是否可以……
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to…
⏹过渡句
⏹Opinions are divided on this issue.
⏹Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
⏹Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter.
⏹Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.
⏹介绍正方观点:
⏹Sixty percent of the students are for the idea.
⏹Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to…
⏹Some people think that …According to them, all of us should...
⏹Some believe that…
⏹They are of the opinion that …
⏹进一步介绍正方观点
⏹What’s more, we can …as well as …
⏹Besides, it’s …, which …
⏹介绍反方观点
⏹However, … of the students think…
⏹On the other hand, …of the students think…
⏹However, others have different opinions.
⏹But …of the students think…
⏹Others argue that …In their opinion,…
⏹进一步介绍反方观点
⏹What’s worse…
⏹What’s more…
⏹In addition, …
⏹Besides, …
⏹Plus, …
⏹First,… Second, …Third, …
⏹总结句
⏹In short, no agreement has been reached yet.
⏹So far, no agreement has been reached.
⏹In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
⏹作文模板
⏹ __________ had a discussion about whether__________. Opinions are divided on this issue. ________of the students think _________ should ________. _____. What’s more, _______.
⏹ On the other hand, ______ of the students think _______ shouldn’t ______. What’s worse, ______.
⏹ In short, _______ have not arrived at any agreement yet.
⏹ the structure of the article
⏹ The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. Opinions are divided on this issue. Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very easy for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet.
⏹ 作业
⏹利用今天课上所学完成以下作文
⏹假设你是李华,最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
赞成迁出 | 反对迁出 |
1.游客多,交通堵塞 2.郊区环境好 | 3.建于1906年,中外闻名 4.2. 搬迁易造成动物死亡 |
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇: 郊区—suburb
June 3 ,2005
Dear Editor ,
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