【命题趋势】
第二批高考改革由山东省等几个省开始。2020年起启用新高考试题。其中写作部分由原来的一个100字左右作文计(25分)改为二节。其一:写一篇80字左右应用文(计15分),其二:阅读后续写一个不超过60字的概要或者续写一篇150字左右的短文(计25分)。下面就应用文展开阐述。
应用文体裁选中的概率排列顺序如下:书信(各种信件及电子邮件)、通知、演讲稿等。
命题方式:根据给出的体裁、写作目的、写作对象及写作要点(提纲)写作。注意:没有任何有关格式等方面的提示。这一点与原全国卷一、卷二、卷三不同。
【满分技巧】
一、写作时注意点:
在熟知相关体裁规范的书写格式(网络及教师都有涉及且较简单这里不再赘述)的情况下,注意以下几点:
A. 抓住已给的要点
把所有要点用规范地道的语言表达出来,切忌汉语式英语。要点顺序可按照行文需要调整。所提示的英语词汇一定要出现在作文中。
B. 行文要语篇连贯
所有要点内容要用适当的词、短语、句子恰到好处地过渡、衔接起来以使文章流畅、连贯、优美。
C. 语言要简明扼要
不使用一些难、深的词,也不使用一些结构过于复杂的长句。字数应该控制在规定字数的+15%。
二、常考体裁写作模板(含格式)
A. 应聘信
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is / I’m . And I am writing to apply for (职位).
I’m good at / I can (任该职位的优势1). Besides / What’s more / Moreover, I’m skil(l)ful at n / doing(任该职位的优势2).
I’m much interested in / I show much interest in / I want very much to take this job because (任该职位正面可广为接受的目的)
Hoping for your acceptance / Looking forward your reply.
Yours (ever) / (Ever) yours
Li Hua
注1:此处是以折表式书写。还有齐头式,即所有行、段落均顶格书写。另外:二个字的姓名这样书写Li Hua(李华)。三个字的姓名这样书写Li Xiaohua(李晓华)
B. 通知
STUDENTS UNION(发布通知的单位、组织名称)
Sep 22, 2019(发布日期。如果没给可不写)
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
You’ll do (活动内容). (此处取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua(发布通知的人签名)
C. 演讲稿
Good Morning / Afternoon / Evening
I’m (演讲者姓名) from (演讲者的单位/组织名称). The topic of my speech is (演讲题目/主题).
As is known to us all / As we know, (与主题有关的现实存在的现象). Though (现实存在的现象的好处), (现实存在的现象的弊端)
How to solve these problems is a great challenge to everyone. / Are there any solutions to these problems? My suggestion is that (消除的弊端的方法). Firstly, (采用该方法的好处/理由1). Secondly, (采用该方法的好处/理由2). What’s more, (采用该方法的好处/理由3).
Since there are so many advantages / disadvantages, why not do / do (呼吁行动起来)?
Thank you for listening!
注2:各种应用文的格式是基本不变的。但其构成主体不是几个模板所能全部概括的,表达方法也是千变万化的。只有通过多读、多看、多练才能写出高分作文。
注3:因受本节写作字数要求的,涉及书信、通知体裁的考题出现概率最高。
【技巧应用】
下面以《2018年高考英语卷二》为例来阐述《满分技巧》的实际应用:
A. 原题
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;
2.放映时间、地点;
3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
B. 范文
STDENTS UNION
Jun 3, 2018
Notice
ATTENTION! EVERYONE
To enrich students' campus life, the Student Union is going to invite all the students to enjoy an English movie called Growing Together, which mainly talks about the school development. The movie will be shown in the lecture hall of the Art Building from 20:00 p.m. to 20:30 p.m. on Sunday evening. Those who intend to participate in it are welcome to see it for free. In addition, you are required to be there 10 minutes earlier and while watching the film , please keep quiet and clean. Any comments and suggestions are welcome. (103字) (正式格式)
C. 范文解析(每个分号表示一个语言单位)
a. 要点(采分点):STDENTS UNION,Jun 3, 2018;the Student Union invite all the students to enjoy an English movie; called Growing Together; which mainly talks about the school development; The movie will be shown in the lecture hall of the Art Building from 20:00 p.m. to 20:30 p.m. on Sunday evening; Any comments and suggestions are welcome.(切不可把“校宣传栏‘英语天地’”作为要点,因为它不是通知的内容和格式的需要)
b. 格式需要和起衔接作用的词、短语和句子(此处所用的词可根据写作字数的要求而增加或减少)
Attention please, everyone; To enrich students' campus life; Those who intend to participate in it are welcome to see it for free; In addition, you are required to be there 10 minutes earlier and while watching the film, please keep quiet and clean.
D. 范文的衍生(以此来说明同一篇作文有多种版本)
Notice
Attention, please,
Good news for you!Student Union will invite everybody to see a 30-minute English film, Growing Together, about the school development. You are requested to arrive at the lecture hall of the Art Building before 20:00 p.m. on Sunday evening. Besides, we are expecting your comments and advice on how to improve it.
Student Union
Jun 3, 2018(62字) (非正式格式)
【热点话题】阅读、健康、运动、社会热点、垃圾分类等
【限时检测】(建议用时:30分钟)
A
(山东九校2019年12月份高三检测考试)
体裁:感谢信 | 难度:★★ | 建议用时:7分钟 |
假定你是学生会李华,你校外籍教师Mr. Brown在英语戏剧社纳新期间协助招募新成员。请你用
英语给Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件表示感谢,同时请他推荐话剧表演的剧目并给以指导。内容包括:
1. 感谢帮助;
2. 请求推荐话剧;
3. 希望指导。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:recruit new members 纳新。
范文:(齐头式)
Dear Mr. Brown,
I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in recruiting new members for the school Drama Club. Many students who are enthusiastic about English plays have joined the club.
The school English Drama Festival is scheduled to be held next month. Would you please recommend several English plays? And I’d appreciate it if you'd like to offer us some guidance on performance at your convenience.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours, Li Hua
范文解析
a. 要点(采分点): Dear Mr. Brown; express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in recruiting new members for the school Drama Club; Would you please recommend several English plays; offer us some guidance on performance; Looking forward to your reply; Yours, Li Hua
b. 格式需要和起衔接作用的词、短语和句子:I’m writing to; Many students who are enthusiastic about English plays have joined the club; The school English Drama Festival is scheduled to be held next month; And I’d appreciate it if you'd like to; at your convenience.
B
(山西省实验中学2020届第一学期高三年级阶段性测评)
体裁:邀请信 | 难度:★★ | 建议用时:8分钟 |
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Jay一直对中国美食感兴趣。请你写一封信邀请他参加山西举办的美食文化节,内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 时间地点; 3. 活动内容。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文:(折表式)
Dear Jay,
To spread Chinese food culture, the First Shanxi International Chinese Culture Food Festival will be held in Liuxiang of downtown Taiyuan from 21st to 28th in November. I’ m writing to invite you to attend it.
During it, some chefs will demonstrate their wonderful cooking skills of making different delicious noodles and visitors are welcome to taste them for free. I think it is a good chance for you to understand Chinese culture.
Looking forward to your coming here soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
范文解析
a. 要点(采分点):Dear Jay; the First Shanxi International Chinese Culture Food Festival will be held in Liuxiang of downtown Taiyuan from 21st to 28th in November; invite you to attend it; some chefs will demonstrate their wonderful cooking skills of making different delicious noodles and visitors are welcome to taste them for free; Looking forward to your coming here soon! Yours, Li Hua
b. 格式需要和起衔接作用的词、短语和句子:To spread Chinese food culture; I’ m writing to; During it; I think it is a good chance for you to understand Chinese culture.
C
(浙江镇海2018高三一模)
体裁:倡议书 | 难度:★★ | 建议用时:8分钟 |
为了配合学校开展垃圾分类工作,学生会向全校学生发出了垃圾分类,从我做起的。假如你是学生会李华,请你用英语写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1. 垃圾分类的意义
2. 垃圾分类的做法
3. 呼吁全体学生参加
注意: 词数80左右。参考词汇垃圾分类rubbish classification
范文:
Dear fellow students.
Our school has launched a program of rubbish classification. Different kinds of garbage are required to be sorted out and placed in different dustbins. Paper can be recycled, while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs. Above all, harmful things like plastics and used batteries mustn’t be mixed with other wastes.
The program is of great benefit. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable garbage and harmful things will not pollute our environment after special treatment.
Let's work together for a better campus!
范文解析
a. 要点(采分点):Our school has launched a program of rubbish classification; Different kinds of garbage are required to be sorted out and placed in different dustbins; Paper can be recycled, while leftovers can be collected as food for pigs; harmful things like plastics and used batteries mustn’t be mixed with other wastes; We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable garbage and harmful things will not pollute our environment after special treatment; Let's work together for a better campus!
b. 格式需要和起衔接作用的词、短语和句子:Above all; The program is of great benefit.
D
(浙江省2020年高考英语仿真模拟试题03)
体裁:便条 | 难度:★★ | 建议用时:7分钟 |
今天早上,你接到了一个通知你的室友Lily参加社团面试的电话,请你给她写一封便条, 告诉她这件事。 便条的主要内容有:
1. 电话的内容;
2. 提醒她别忘记。
注意:1. 词数80字左右;
2. 可以适当发挥;以使行文连贯。
范文:
Sept. 9th
Dear Lily,
This morning, when you were out of our dormitory there was a call from the association you had applied for, which informed you to attend the interview. You are asked to go to the interview at 9:00 a. m. on Sunday in the Room 303 of the Xingzhi Building.
I know that you are eager to join this association, and it is a good chance, so do not miss it!
Yours
Wendy
范文解析
a. 要点(采分点):Sept. 9th; Dear Lily; a call from the association you had applied for; informed you to attend the interview; go to the interview at 9:00 a. m. on Sunday in the Room 303 of the Xingzhi Building. Yours
Wendy
b. 格式需要和起衔接作用的词、短语和句子:This morning, when you were out of our dormitory there was; which; You are asked to; I know that you are eager to join this association, and it is a good chance, so do not miss it!