学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1.三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2.父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3 分担家务,周末户外活动;
4.相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长:
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60 - 80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
popular adj.受欢迎的
activity n..活动
rule n.规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming.
满分作文:
【分析】【高分句型一】
We keep company with each other and communicate with each other as often as possible.
我们互相陪伴,尽可能经常地互相沟通.keep company with each other 互相陪伴,as often as possible尽可能经常
【高分句型二】
My parents and I are interested in reading books.
我父母和我对读书很感兴趣.be interested in 对……感兴趣
【解答】My Family
I'm Li Ming.I have a happy family of three.We get on well with our neighbors.(三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;)Both of my parents are teachers.They are very popular at school. (父母为教师,在校深受欢迎)We share our housework.On weekends we do different kinds of outdoor activities together.(分担家务,周末户外活动)We keep company with each other and communicate with each other as often as possible. 【高分句型一】My parents make some good family rules to help me grow up. (相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长)My parents and I are interested in reading books.【高分句型二】 We have a lot of books at home. We often go to the library to read books in our free time.Books are like our friends.(家人都喜欢读书)
Do you love my family?
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年湖北省随州市中考英语满分作文
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品.作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化.请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文.
要点提示:1.历史悠久,约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用;
2.种植广泛,安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名:
3.喝茶有很多好处:有利健康,醒脑提神等;
4.世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具.
写作要求:1.文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
2.词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名.
China is famous for tea.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
A cup of tea can make you relaxed and fresh.一杯茶可以使你放松和清醒.
make +n./pron.+adj,make you relaxed and fresh使你放松和清醒
【高分句型二】
It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea sets.似乎全世界许多人都喜欢喝茶和收集茶具.
It seems that…似乎,好像
【解答】China is famous for tea.Chinese tea has a long history.It's said that Shen Nong was the first to discover tea as a drink about 5,000 years ago.(历史悠久)Tea is produced in many different areas.Anxi and Hangzhou are widely known for their tea.(种植广泛)There are lots of advantages of drinking tea.It's good for health.A cup of tea can make you relaxed and fresh.【高分句型一】(喝茶有很多好处)It seems that many people all over the world love drinking tea and collecting tea sets.【高分句型二】(世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具)
As middle school students,we should know about tea culture and spread it around the world.(感受)
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年湖北省孝感市中考英语满分作文
随着年龄的增长,你周围的事物也发生了很大变化.请根据以下提示,以"Great changes around me"为题,写一篇短文.
写作要点:1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气…河水…
2.现在.路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利;高楼林立;蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱;人们…
3.感受, …
写作要求:1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译;
2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整;
3文中不得出现任何宾实的信息(地名、校名和人名等);
4.100词左右, 短文的翅目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数.
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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【分析】【高分句型一】
The roads used to be narrow and crowded.
道路过去是狭窄,拥挤的.used to do sth过去常常做某事.
【高分句型二】
It's really convenient for people to go out.
很方便人们外出.It's +形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是…的.
【解答】Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. 【高分句型一】The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.(过去)
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. 【高分句型二】We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white.The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.(现在)
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省黄石市中考英语满分作文
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tom回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩.
内容包括:
1.读几本好书;
.参加社会实践活动;
.帮父母做家务;
.和朋友一起锻炼;
.邀请Tom.
注意:
1.词数80左右;
.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
.文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
参考词汇:有意义的 meaningful
经典文学作品 classic literature works
社会实践活动 social practice activities
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think reading can increase our knowledge and make us know more about the world.我认为阅读可以增加我们的知识,让我们更多的世界上两个赛季.
I think+宾语从句;动名词reading作主语.
【高分句型二】
If you have time, welcome to Huangshi.如果你有时间,欢迎来黄石.
if引导条件状语从句.
【解答】Dear Tom,
I'm very happy to hear from you.During the holiday, I'm going to read some good books.I think reading can increase our knowledge and make us know more about the world.【高分句型一】(读几本好书)I also plan to take part in social practice activities.It can help me to learn things that I can't learn in books.(参加社会实践活动)I plan to help my parents with the housework and learn how to cook.I wish I could cook for my parents myself.(帮父母做家务)In addition, I plan to take exercise with my friends because health is the basis of getting good grades.(和朋友一起锻炼)
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What's your plan for the summer?(询问对方计划)
If you have time,welcome to Huangshi.【高分句型】 I am looking forward to your earliest reply.(邀请)
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省襄阳市中考英语满分作文
据了解,为了进一步引导中学生积极参加体育锻炼,提高身体素质,襄阳市教育主管部门正在研究制定有关"中考"体育考试的改革方案( the plan),考虑在原有项目的基础上增加篮球、排球或足球,总分(the score)也由30分增加至50分.作为一名参加过体育"中考"的学生,你对这样的改革持什么样的态度.请根据写作要点提示,用英语写一篇短文表述你的观点.
1.要点提示:
(l)观点明确(要么赞成,要么反对):
(2)理由充分(可针对增加考试的项目和调整的分值,也可只选其一.限三条理由);
(3)给出建议(围绕你的观点提出一条合理化建议).
2.注意事项:
(l)字数:90词左右;(2)行文应连贯流畅; (3)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】高分句型一:It's said that basketball,volleyball and soccer will be added to the test,此句用上了It's said that…结构,意为"据说…",同时,用上了被动语态be added,意为"被添加,被增加",这句话意为"据说篮球、排球和足球增加到了考试中"
高分句型二:So here come the changes,这句话在结构上,用到了倒装句式,其主语为the changes意为"那些变化",这句话意为"所以那些变化就到来了"
【解答】My Attitude on the Changes of Physical Examinations
Hello,everyone,I'm Mike.Recently,I heard that there might be some changes about the physical examination. It's said that basketball,volleyball and soccer will be added to the test【高分句型一】,and the score will rise from 30 points to 50 points. As a student who has taken the physical test in senior high school entrance examination,I have some opinions.(开篇点题,说明观点)
First of all,I totally agree with the changes. nowadays,more and more students at school just ask for grades but forget the impotance of health,they study day and night and even sleep less than eight hours a day.Then they become weak in sports,don't know how to play balls.Actually,some of them nearly get into studying machines.So here come the changes【高分句型二】,the physical examination will force them to play basketball,soccer or any other balls,but in a word,they start exercising!It's a good phenomenon.(观点一)
On the other hand,the purpose of education is to provide the world with useful people,not useless bookworms,so once they take the sports seriously,they will practise as hard as they spend time on papers.Therefore,they become strong,wiser and able to fight for their careers.The society can be developed,too.(观点二)
At the same time,I have a suggestion.I advise the government to carry on the plan sternly to make sure it can improve students' poor physical situations.(收尾呼应,提出建议.)
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
2019年湖北省荆门市中考英语满分作文
为弘扬中华传统文化,你校举办了一次"戏曲进校园"展演活动.假定你是李华,请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John.
要点:1.时间:5月16日下午2:30;
2.地点:学校操场;
3.内容:校长在开幕式上致辞:戏曲知识竞赛:师生戏曲表演等;
4.感受:对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2.语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4.词数:80﹣100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数).
参考词汇:戏曲opera(n.)开幕式opening ceremony(n.)表演performance(n.)致辞make a speech
Dear John,
How is everything going?I'm writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.最后,我们享受美妙的戏剧表演将由一些老师和学生有才华的歌剧.
in the end最后;put on 过去分词作后置定语.
【高分句型二】
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture.通过这次活动,我们有一个更好的理解歌剧和中国传统文化接近.
have a better understanding of…对…有个更深的了解.
【解答】Dear John,
How is everything going?I'm writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.(点题)
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground.(时间,地点) In the ,the headmastcr made a specch at the opening ceremony to inspire us students to learn more about Chinese culture.After that,there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge.In the end,we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.【高分句型一】(内容)
Through this activity,we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. 【高分句型二】I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.(感受)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省咸宁市中考英语满分作文
运动塑造健康,团结凝聚力量.5月10 日,学校举办了春季运动会.你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目,战绩显著.其他同学观看了比赛,并为选手们加油喝彩.请你根据下面四幅图片的提示,写一篇日记,介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况,并抒发自己的活动感受.
写作要求:
1.文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息,可适当发挥.行文连贯,条理清晰;
3.词数80~100个,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总字数.
参考词汇:teamwork
Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet._______________________________
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【分析】【高分句型一】
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result.
我们班的每个人都感到很兴奋,因为我们取得了很好的结果.because引导原因状语从句.
【高分句型二】
Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race.
同时,团队合作在接力赛中扮演着重要的角色.play an important role in 在……起重要作用.
【解答】Friday,May 11th, 2019, Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the 100﹣meter race and the 400﹣meter relay race.(点题)
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result.【高分句型一】 Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmatesYuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys' 100﹣meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on.(比赛情况)
From this sports meet, I know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. 【高分句型二】As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省黄冈市中考英语满分作文
同学们,在初中三年的英语学习中,我们从课本中学习了有关 "Family"、 "Be polite to sb."、"Protecting the envinmment"、 "Volunteering"等话题和功能.假定你是李磊,请参考这些话题和功能,依据以下要点提示,写一篇题为 "I'm Proud of My Family"的英语短文,向校报投稿,讲述你的家庭故事.
要点提示:1、家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;
2、邻里和睦,礼貌待人;
3、爱护环境,从我做起:
4、积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童.
写作要求:l、词数90左有(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2、根据要点提示,适当发挥;
3、短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名.
参考词汇:Work hard; be friendly to each other,get on well with; protect the environment;
be volunteers
I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.我的家人尽力保护环境在我们的日常生活中.
try one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事.
【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work.我父亲习惯乘公共汽车去上班.
be used to doing sth习惯做某事.
【解答】I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.My family love each other. My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.(家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作)
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.(邻里和睦,礼貌待人)
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.【高分句型一】 My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. 【高分句型二】I never order takeaway food.(爱护环境,从我做起)
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.(积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童)
What a happy family! I'm proud of my family!(总结全文)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省鄂州市中考英语满分作文
现在越来越多的学生使用"作业帮"这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目.对此,不同的人有不同的看法.请根据以下文字的提示,并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文.
优点 | 1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难; 2.在家就能学习,简单,方便; 3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师,学习兴趣更浓. |
缺点 | 1.有的学生假装学习,事实上在玩游戏; 2.有的学生不想思考,直接照抄答案, 他们根本不关心自己的学习,只是虚度光阴. |
你的建议 | 联系实际,给出自己合理的建议. |
1. 80﹣100 词.(开头的首句已给出,不计算在词数内)
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息,否则,不予评分.
参考词汇:convenient 方便的,便利的 pretend to do…假装做…
think independently 思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think it's good for students who are hard﹣working. 我认为这是有利于学生勤奋.
I think +宾语从句;it is+形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是…的.
【高分句型二】
But for students who don't want to study, it's very bad.但对于不想学习的学生,这很糟糕.
who引导定语从句.
【解答】Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. (点题)
Some people think it's useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It's easy and convenient for them.They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.(优点)
However, others don't think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don't want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don't care about their studying at all. It's a waste of time.(缺点)
I think it's good for students who are hard﹣working. 【高分句型一】They can study better. But for students who don't want to study, it's very bad.【高分句型二】(我的建议)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省鄂州市中考英语满分作文
现在越来越多的学生使用"作业帮"这个APP 来搜查他们不会做的题目.对此,不同的人有不同的看法.请根据以下文字的提示,并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文.
优点 | 1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难; 2.在家就能学习,简单,方便; 3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师,学习兴趣更浓. |
缺点 | 1.有的学生假装学习,事实上在玩游戏; 2.有的学生不想思考,直接照抄答案, 他们根本不关心自己的学习,只是虚度光阴. |
你的建议 | 联系实际,给出自己合理的建议. |
1. 80﹣100 词.(开头的首句已给出,不计算在词数内)
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息,否则,不予评分.
参考词汇:convenient 方便的,便利的 pretend to do…假装做…
think independently 思考
Today, more and more students are using the App zuoyebang. However, different people have different ideas about it. Some people think _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think it's good for students who are hard﹣working. 我认为这是有利于学生勤奋.
I think +宾语从句;it is+形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是…的.
【高分句型二】
But for students who don't want to study, it's very bad.但对于不想学习的学生,这很糟糕.
who引导定语从句.
【解答】Today, more and more students are using the APP zuoyebang. Different people have different ideas about it. (点题)
Some people think it's useful. The APP zuoyebang can help students to solve difficulties in their studying in time. It's easy and convenient for them.They can study at home. They can choose their own teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.(优点)
However, others don't think so. They think some students just pretend to study, in fact they play games. They don't want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don't care about their studying at all. It's a waste of time.(缺点)
I think it's good for students who are hard﹣working. 【高分句型一】They can study better. But for students who don't want to study, it's very bad.【高分句型二】(我的建议)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省黄冈市中考英语满分作文
同学们,在初中三年的英语学习中,我们从课本中学习了有关 "Family"、 "Be polite to sb."、"Protecting the envinmment"、 "Volunteering"等话题和功能.假定你是李磊,请参考这些话题和功能,依据以下要点提示,写一篇题为 "I'm Proud of My Family"的英语短文,向校报投稿,讲述你的家庭故事.
要点提示:1、家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作;
2、邻里和睦,礼貌待人;
3、爱护环境,从我做起:
4、积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童.
写作要求:l、词数90左有(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2、根据要点提示,适当发挥;
3、短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名.
参考词汇:Work hard; be friendly to each other,get on well with; protect the environment;
be volunteers
I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei.I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.我的家人尽力保护环境在我们的日常生活中.
try one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事.
【高分句型二】
My father is used to taking the bus to work.我父亲习惯乘公共汽车去上班.
be used to doing sth习惯做某事.
【解答】I'm Proud of My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister and I.My family love each other. My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too.(家人相亲相爱,努力学习、工作)
My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other.(邻里和睦,礼貌待人)
My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life.【高分句型一】 My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. 【高分句型二】I never order takeaway food.(爱护环境,从我做起)
My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people.(积极参加志愿活动,帮助贫困儿童)
What a happy family! I'm proud of my family!(总结全文)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省咸宁市中考英语满分作文
运动塑造健康,团结凝聚力量.5月10 日,学校举办了春季运动会.你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目,战绩显著.其他同学观看了比赛,并为选手们加油喝彩.请你根据下面四幅图片的提示,写一篇日记,介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况,并抒发自己的活动感受.
写作要求:
1.文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息,可适当发挥.行文连贯,条理清晰;
3.词数80~100个,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总字数.
参考词汇:teamwork
Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet._______________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
【分析】【高分句型一】
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result.
我们班的每个人都感到很兴奋,因为我们取得了很好的结果.because引导原因状语从句.
【高分句型二】
Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race.
同时,团队合作在接力赛中扮演着重要的角色.play an important role in 在……起重要作用.
【解答】Friday,May 11th, 2019, Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the 100﹣meter race and the 400﹣meter relay race.(点题)
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result.【高分句型一】 Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmatesYuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys' 100﹣meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on.(比赛情况)
From this sports meet, I know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. 【高分句型二】As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.(感受)
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.
2019年湖北省荆门市中考英语满分作文
为弘扬中华传统文化,你校举办了一次"戏曲进校园"展演活动.假定你是李华,请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John.
要点:1.时间:5月16日下午2:30;
2.地点:学校操场;
3.内容:校长在开幕式上致辞:戏曲知识竞赛:师生戏曲表演等;
4.感受:对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2.语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4.词数:80﹣100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数).
参考词汇:戏曲opera(n.)开幕式opening ceremony(n.)表演performance(n.)致辞make a speech
Dear John,
How is everything going?I'm writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.最后,我们享受美妙的戏剧表演将由一些老师和学生有才华的歌剧.
in the end最后;put on 过去分词作后置定语.
【高分句型二】
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture.通过这次活动,我们有一个更好的理解歌剧和中国传统文化接近.
have a better understanding of…对…有个更深的了解.
【解答】Dear John,
How is everything going?I'm writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.(点题)
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground.(时间,地点) In the ,the headmastcr made a specch at the opening ceremony to inspire us students to learn more about Chinese culture.After that,there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge.In the end,we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.【高分句型一】(内容)
Through this activity,we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. 【高分句型二】I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.(感受)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.