1.你校英语角将举办一次主题为 How I learn English 的英语沙龙活动并特邀你在活动中发言。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点提示:
1.你对英语重要性的认识;
2.你学习英语的方法;
3.你对学习英语的建议。
注意:1. 词数150左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to be here to talk about my experience of learning English.
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Thank you!
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to be here to talk about my experience of learning English.
There’s no doubt that English is one of the most used languages in the world. Learning English well will give us a chance to learn about other countries and better understand their cultures.
To learn English, I insist on reading English newspapers every day, through which I not only have improved my comprehension ability but also opened my mind. As for my oral English, I practice speaking English every day and listen to tapes of world-famous English speeches. What’s more, I have developed the habit of keeping diaries in English, which helps a lot with my writing.
Learning English seems to be difficult for beginners. However, nothing is too difficult if you put your heart into it. As the saying goes: interest is the best teacher. If you become interested in English, you’ll find it much easier to learn. Besides, confidence is also important because it prevents you from giving up whenever you run into difficulties.
Thank you!
【高级表达】
There’s no doubt that English is one of the most used languages in the world. 毫无疑问,英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言之一。使用了there’s no doubt that…“毫无疑问”,句型。
Learning English well will give us a chance to learn about other countries and better understand their cultures. 学好英语将使我们有机会了解其他国家,更好地了解他们的文化。动词ing形式作主语。
2.假定你是李华,你的英国好友 Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游,想先学习一些中文,却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他,写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下:
1) 你给他的学习建议
2) 介绍你的帮助计划
3) 对结果的展望
注意:1) 词数100词左右;
2) 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3) 邮件开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this August.Welcome!As I know,you are always interested in Chinese culture and want to learn some Chinese.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.
Learning a foreign language needs great efforts.Apparently,I’d like to be your Teacher and send you an e-book wit my teaching schedule later.Besides,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高级表达】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。例如 :be interested in对……感兴趣,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。另外这篇短文还使用了一些高级句型。例如:.Therefore,I suggest that you choose Chinese daily dlalogues as a start,like greeting people, asking for directions and bargaining for souvenirs,which can help you a lot during your trip.这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非性定语从句。Besides ,Let’s have an online class over the internet every weekend,through which I will try my best to make your learning easier and surely you can speak some fluent Chinese before your arrival. 这里含有一个非性定语从句。
3.假如你是李华,前天你收到英国笔友Kathy发来的电子邮件,说她很想报名参加即将在当地举办的“汉语民歌演唱比赛(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活动,但信心不足。请你给她回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.鼓励她积极报名参加; 2.帮助分析参加的意义; 3.给她提几点建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Kathy,
I am glad to know that
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Kathy,
I am glad to know that you are interested in the Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest to be held in your hometown. It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.
Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. What's more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese. If you want to do a great job, you should do more practice before the contest. Of course, it is a good idea to listen to some Chinese music programs before the contest so that you can get a much better understanding of Chinese fold music.
I am sure you can do a good job! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【高级表达】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的复合句。例如:使用了表语从句What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. 和定语从句What's more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese..
4.假如你是李华。来自澳大利亚的交换生Kenton首次离家来中国读书,因生活上和语言交流上有困难,他萌生了回家的念头。不知如何是好的他在某网站上发帖求助,请你据此给他回帖。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kenton,
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Kenton,
I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but I am willing to help you out of the trouble.
To tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home. But personally, I don’t think we can live with our parents all the life. Thus, it is a good chance for you to be more independent. You can call your parents more often instead of giving up your study.
If you don’t mind, I would like to be your friend. We can chat online frequently, which will improve your Chinese a lot. Only by communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【高级表达】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: be willing to愿意,To tell you the truth说实话。还使用了宾语从句I am sorry to hear you have difficulty with life and communication abroad, but I am willing to help you out of the trouble.和主语从句To tell you the truth, it is natural that you are missing your parents and want to go home.提升了文章的整体水平。
5.假设你是李华,你的外籍好友Jane在你校举办的汉字拼写大赛中获得一等奖。请你给她写一封信,内容包括:1.向她表示祝贺; 2. 请她介绍语言学习的经验.
注意:1.词数100左右
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总数.
参考词汇:汉字拼写大赛:Chinese Character Spelling Contest
Dear Jane,
I’m Li Hua. _________________________________________________________________________________
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Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Jane
I’m Li Hua .On hearing that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Character Spelling Contest held by my school, I felt exceedingly excited! Congratulations to you!
As your good friend, I am proud of you! Your proficiency in Chinese Character as well as your deep dive into Chinese culture has left a lasting impression on me. It came as no surprise that you won the contest. You deserve it! I wonder how you are able to master a foreign language. I really wish to improve my English , so could you please share with me your own experience and unique views on language learning?
I will be grateful if you write me back. I am looking forward to your early reply. Thank you in advance and wish you all the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
【高级表达】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如on + v-ing,be proud of,leave a lasting impression on,look forward to,in advance。还运用了It came as no surprise that you won the contest.这句话运用了主语从句;I wonder how you are able to master a foreign language.这句话运用了宾语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:as well as, so, and等等。
6.假定你是李华,某中学生杂志英语习作专栏正在开展主题为“Why should we learn English?”的征文活动。请你根据所给要点写一篇征文稿。
1.提高学习语言的能力;
2.有助于了解异国文化;
3.能够结识更多的朋友。
注意:1.词数100个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
English is an international language so it is necessary and good for us to learn English.
First, learning English can help us improve our ability to learn languages . We learn new words and grammar, which makes it possible for us to learn new languages well in the future. Second, learning English opens the door to another culture. At the same time, we will be able to gain a better understanding about the culture of other countries. Last but not the least, learning English allows us to make a lot of new friends by communicating with them in English face to face or on the Internet.
In a word, learning English means a lot. We should work hard and try to have a good command of it.
【范文亮点】“English is an international language so it is necessary and good for us to learn English”,开篇点题,讲述学习英语的重要性,对本文写作主题进行概括性论述;运用“First、Second、Last but not the least”,进行本文要点的叙述,行文连贯;
文章运用“help us improve ,帮助某人做…”,“makes it possible做成…”,“At the same time同时、同样”,“be able to gain 能够获得…”,“allows us to make允许某人做某事”,“face to face面对面”,“In a word总而言之”,“have a good command of it掌握…”,等高频词组与短语。写作不是一朝一夕就能练就的,考生应大量积累此类短语与词组,勤加练习,熟能生巧。
7.假设你是李华,最近收到朋友李磊的一封来信。信中李磊提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难,这让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示,写一篇回给李磊的建议信,帮他解决困难,促进学习。
建议内容:
1. 不要灰心,保持良好心态;
2. 掌握学习方法;
3. 培养对英语的兴趣爱好。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】I've received your letter, saying you have some difficulties in learning English. I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.
My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you.
亮点:本文内容简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。语言委婉有礼貌。句式灵活多变。既有简单句,又有复合句。同时顺序连词的运用,让文章结构严谨,一气呵成。
第一段陈述写信的原由。在本段中运用了非谓语作状语saying you have some difficulties in learning English。宾语从句:I'm sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem和状语从句:the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.本段句式最为复杂。
第二段中提出了自己的建议并阐述了理由。本段以My suggestions are as follows. 展开,用顺序边连词“Firstly,…Secondly…..,Thirdly….what’s more” 组织了四个建议。在本段中以简单句为主,同时辅以一个由which引导的非性定语从句which can improve your listening and speaking abilities.及一个状语从句 the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class.。使整段文章有张有驰。
结尾段用一个宾语从句礼貌地表达希望自己的建议对对方有用的愿望。
8.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack想学习汉语,你推荐他去孔子学院,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐理由;
2.相关课程,如中国历史,传统文化等。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:孔子学院Confucius Institute
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese. Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.
Confucius Institute provides various interesting subjects. You will learn Chinese history and traditional culture as well as Chinese writing. Also, you have more chances to talk with classmates in Chinese. Besides, teachers will introduce some Chinese traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Day and Mid-Autumn Day. Some relevant activities will be held during different festivals, such as making dumplings or eating zongzi, where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.
I hope you will find my recommendation helpful and attractive.
Yours,
Li Hua
亮点:本文结构完整合理,内容要点齐全。文章以简单句为主,同时辅以如定语从句(Confucius Institute may be a good choice, which is intended for the Chinese learners who are not native.和…where you can not only enjoy delicious meals but also have a good knowledge of Chinese life.)和名词从句(I’m more than pleased to know that you are eager to learn Chinese.和I hope you will find my recommendation helpful and attractive)。句式灵活生动而丰富多彩。文章中使用了大量的短语(如more than pleased ,have a good knowledge of,be intended for ,have more chances to talk with )使同时连词(如as well as ,Also, Besides,not only….but also…)的运用,连接过渡词及固定短语的的使用,使文章层次感增强,语言更生动。
9.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友 Edward 正在学习汉语,希望你推荐一个适合他的学习汉语 的网站。请你根据以下内容, 给他回复邮件。
推荐网站:
网站内容:1. 中文情景对话,中国风俗,中国电影,中文歌曲、成语和唐诗等;
2. 有在线老师答疑解惑。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese. I’d like to recommend to you. It’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.
Firstly, it provides you with a variety of online courses, such as Chinese idioms, dialogues and customs. Besides, it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways. Here you can learn to sing Chinese songs, enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies. More importantly, there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.
Wish you a happy learning time.
Yours
Li Hua
【高级表达】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: a variety of各种各样的,such as例如。还使用了定语从句It’s a good website for non-Chine se speakers who are learning Chinese, especially for beginners.和定语从句I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
10.近年来全球掀起了学汉语的热潮,美国人Tony也是汉语爱好者,他想在网上招募一名汉语学习顾问 (adviser)。假如你是李华,请你给Tony写一封应征信,要点如下:
1写信目的;
2性格优点(外向、热情、友好等);
3语言优势(懂英语、了解一些中外文化等)。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】Dear Tony,
I’ve learned from your post that you are recruiting an adviser to help you learn Chinese so I’m writing to recommend myself.
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinhua High School. First of all, as an out-going, friendly and open person, I love making friends and helping them with their studies. Besides, I can speak both English and Chinese fluently. More importantly, in my spare time, I love reading books about Western and Chinese culture and customs. I think we are sure to help each other make progress if you choose me as your adviser.
I believe I’m the right person you’re looking for. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
11.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Edward正在学习汉语,希望你推荐一个适合他学习汉语的网站。请你根据以下内容,给他回复邮件。
推荐网站:
网站内容:
1. 网络课程的内容;
2. 其它相关资源;
3. 有在线老师答疑,全部免费。
注意: 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】Dear Edward,
I’m more than pleasedto know that you are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend to you.I’s a good website for non-Chinese speakers who are learing Chinese especially for beginners.
Firstly,it provides you with a variety of online courses,such as Chinese idioms,dialogues and customs.Through these courses you will have a good understanding of the Chinese language as well as its culture.Besides,it will help you learn Chinese in interesting and effective ways.Here you can learn to sing some Chinese songs,enjoy Tang poems and watch Chinese movies.More importantly,there are teachers online whom you can turn to for help. And all this is free of charge.
I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful. Wish you a happy learning time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【高级表达】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: provides sb. with sth.给某人提供某物,a variety of各总各样的。还使用了宾语从句I’m more than pleased to know that you are learning Chinese.和宾语从句I hope you will find this website attractive and helpful.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。
12.假设你是李平,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请根据下列要求写封回信。
要点:
1.参加中文; 2.看中文书刊、电视;
3.学唱中文歌曲; 4.交中国朋友。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
【参考范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.
First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Secondly, it is a good idea if you can watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, singing Chinese songs can help you learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Finally, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you do better in Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
亮点:本文内容完整,涵盖全部要求,结构合理,层次清晰,运用了多种句式、连词,表达到位。
第一段点明写信的目的并提出自己的建议。第二段中把文章的主要内容即四个建议用序数连词(first...secondly...besides...finally...)连贯起来,让文章浑然一气呵成。
在第二段中在表述建议时运用了多种句式。 建议(1)是由as引导状语从句:it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 建议(2)是由if引导的的条件状语从句:it is a good idea if you can watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.建设93)是用非谓语中的动词ing形式作主语的句子:singing Chinese songs can help you learn and remember Chinese words more easily. 最后用一个祈使句:Try and write me in Chinese next time,完美地结束本文。
13.13.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack在观看《中国汉语桥》节目时,决定学习中国语言文化,希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示写一封email.
1. 通过中国古典作品了解中国文化:
2. 借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情;
3. 和中国朋友多沟通。
注意:1.词数100词左右.
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的倍息。
参考词汇:《中国汉语桥》:Chinese Bridge Contest;
中国古典作品:classical literature
【参考范文】Dear Jack,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture. I’d like to offer you some suggestions, which I think can be of benefit to your Chinese study.
To learn the Chinese language and culture well, first of all, you have to read some classical literature which will broaden your horizon. Besides, watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning. Last but not least, you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently. Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be good for your Chinese study and that you will make greater progress in it.
【高级表达】
本文是一篇电子邮件,采用三段式,内容齐全,符合要求,文章结构布局合理,文中使用高级句子。I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest使用宾语从句;I’d like to offer you some suggestions, which I think can be of benefit to your Chinese study. which引导非性定语从句;To learn the Chinese language and culture well,动词不定式做目的状语;watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language learning.动名词做主语;Only by doing so can you achieve your goal better.句子运用部分倒装;另外,first of all, Besides, Last but not least,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
14.14.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到对中国文化感兴趣,因此你推荐他观看“中国诗词大会”(Chinese Poetry Competition)这档电视节目。请你给Jim回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1 介绍该节目播出时间和电视频道;(每周五晚8:05, CCTV 1)
2 简单介绍中国诗词;
3 说明推荐的理由。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Jim,
I’m very glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture.
Here, I’d like to recommend to you “ Chinese Poetry Competition”, a TV program broadcast on CCTV1 at 8:05 every Friday night. As we know, Chinese poetry has a long history. Some poems are written to tell a story, while others are written to express the authors’ feelings, such as happiness or sorrow. Most poems rhyme at the end of the lines, and it is the rhythm and rhyme that make poems really beautiful. I believe the program will help you gain a better understanding of Chinese culture, and we can talk about poems in the future.
If you want to know more, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【高级表达】
本文是一篇电子邮件,文章内容齐全,结构布局合理,同时文中使用高级句子。As we know, Chinese poetry has a long history.as引导非性定语从句;Some poems are written to tell a story, while others are written to express the authors’ feelings,while在这里是并列连词,是并列句;it is the rhythm and rhyme that make poems really beautiful.句中使用that引导的定语从句;If you want to know more, please let me know.if引导条件状语从句。
15.假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。
要点:1. 参加中文 2. 看中文书刊、电视 3. 学唱中文歌曲 4. 其他
注意: 1. 词数120左右 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.
Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese characters more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
现在分词作状语:I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
As引导状语从句。it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students.
原因状语从句。it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese characters more easily.
祈使句。Try and write to me in Chinese next time.