如何把作文写好,其中一点,就是背诵一些引题的句子熟悉写作框架,并相应准备一些模板。今天介绍一种对立观点作文的写法。
对立观点题型的框架:第一段:第一句引出现象或者争议的话题;一些人认为,原因是。。。。第二段:另一些人认为,原因是。。。。第三段:我认为,原因是。。。。
1992:My View on Reading Extensively
1993
My Idea of Becoming a Teaching in the Future
*1994
TV: a good thing or a bad thing?
1995
Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
1996
Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school. Now, you have been asked by the Student’s Union to write a passage entitled: The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life
*1997
Some of your classmates think that more pressure from academic studies is not beneficial to students. You either agree or disagree with them: ,
More pressure from academic studies does (does not) good to us
1998
It is now generally accepted that vehicles (cars, trucks, etc.) are a major source of air pollution in cities. You: are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem.,
One way to solve the problem
*1999
We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think that TV advertising brings as benefits, but others don’t think so. What is your opinion? ,
A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television
2000
College life should be varied and colorful. And extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it. However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard. Write an article to the university radio entitled: ,
The importance of extracurricular activities
2001
Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come to know the significance of travel through our own experience:,
Travel broadens the mind
2002
Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health. And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
The Best Way to Stay Healthy
2003
People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.
THE IMPORTANCE OF KEEPING A GOOD MOOD
*2004
Nowadays young people tend to phone more often than write to each other. So, some say that phones will kill letter writing. What is your opinion?
WILL PHONES KILL LETTER WRITING?
2005
The students' Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included.
MY IDEA OF A UNIVERSITY ARTS FESTIVAL
*2006
Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xi'an, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing, and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better, what do you think?
2007
Nowadays the Internet has become part of people’s life, and million of young people have made friends online.
*2009: Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
*2010:It was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week. And each of them paid her 60 Yuan a month. This has led to a heated debate as to whether college students should hire cleaners.
Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
Should College Students Hire Cleaners?
1) Should college students hire cleaners? (2)Students' views on this issue vary from one to another. (3)Some students think that it is reasonable to hire cleaners for laundry and dorm cleaning while others hold that hiring cleaners does harm to the college students. (4)In my point of view, although there are some conveniences of hiring cleaners, the losses far outweigh the benefits. (5)The reasons are mainly as follows:
(6)First of all, students lose the opportunities to enhance their unity and friendship. (7)Friends are indispensable in college life, especially for freshmen. (8)It is a chance for them to develop friendship and teamwork when they clean dorms together and do laundry together. (9)With the joy of working for their own surroundings, they can appreciate college life better. (10) In addition, students become more independent by taking care of their own lives. (11)Doing laundry or cleaning dorms is surely an effective way to learn how to keep a balance between study and the rest and how to arrange schedule properly.
(12)To sum up, hiring cleaners is unnecessary. On campus, students can enjoy a colorful and independent life by doing their own chores, so it is wise not to hire cleaners.
Analysis
Part One:
(1) 开门见山,提出问题。
(2)(3)用In my point of view说明不同的人有不同的观点。
(4)用引出自己的观点。
(5) 起承上启下的作用,引出原因或支持段。
Part Two:
(6)用First of all 引出雇佣清洁工的损失之一,此句为主题句。
(7)(8)(9)对主题句作进一步阐释。
(10)用in addition引出雇佣清洁工的损失之二,此句也是主题句。
(11)对主题句作进一步说明。
Part Three:
(12) 用To sum up总结全文,引申观点。
三:文章开头句型
1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g.)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people
say that....... But I think/view a bit differently.(当被问到....一些人认为...另一些人认为....)
[2]. When it comes to(.谈及)..., some people believe that....... Others
argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true. There is probably some truth
in both arguments/statements, but (I tend to the prefer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged
that.... They claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
*1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论
最近经常辩论的一个问题是。。。。
A much debated issue these days is whether …………..(加一个名词性从句)
最近..…的议题已经引起了人们的广泛注意。Recently, the issue of whether………..has drawn/aroused public attention\\concern. (public可换为popular, grave,wordwide.或者triggered\\sparked a heated debate\\discussion.
(2)现在很多人谈论的最热门的话题之一是.........one of the biggest issues\\hottest topis\\most popular things \\most serious problems many people talked \\complained about now is whether........
[2]. Recently the rise in problem of/ (phenomenon of) ... has cause/
aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
[3]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...
has been brought into focus. (has been brought to public attention)
[4].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the
new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
[1]. Never history has the change of... been as evident as ...
Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of... been more visible/
popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/
coming to realize/accept/ (be aware) that...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity
to......
Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea
that.......
四:模板
观点选择式A or B A much debated issue these days is whether ………….. . Faced with the two decision , there are some people would claim\\believe that______________. They point out that_____________________.
In spite of that, others ,in contrast , there are quiet a few people who agree that _______________.For one thing,_______________,<如果突出个人观点,从简》
As mostly deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. (To be franc ,I am inclined to side with the later\\former(一般将少数人观点放前面,然后同意后者)The main reason is( I believe)that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________.
There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as _______________
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason________).So, it is sagacious <聪慧的,明智的》to support the statement that it is better to _________.
五:范文对照
1:A much debated issue these days is whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala(庆典,演出)should be cancelled.2:People who believe it should be cancelled point out that it is old and the programs are not interesting. 3:They also say that people can do many other interesting things such as visit friends and play computer games.
4:In spite of all these claims, quiet a few people agree that the CCTV Spring Festival Gala has become an important part of our new year.5:For one thing,it brings family members together,and for another,some programs are very funny.6:Some programs make people think.
7:To be franc,I am inclined to side with the latter.8:I believe watching the CCTV Spring Festival Gala has become our habit.9:It is our tradition .10:I hope the CCTV Spring Festival Gala will become better with every new year.
修改范文
1: A much debated issue these days is whether the CCTV Spring Festival Gala,the nationwide live new year celebration party,should be retained or cancelled.2:Its opponents insist that the Gala should not be allowed to continue.3:They point out that the evening obsolete and the programs are far from amusing.4:They also say that bored viewers may as well choose many other substitutes on New Year's Eave,for example ,visiting close friends,playing fascinating computer games,or simply chatting with long-parted parents.
5:In spite of all these claims, quiet a few people agree that the celebration has become an indispensable part of our new year.6:For one thing,it brings family members,far or near,together,seated into the same sofa,and for another,some short plays and crosstalks are very funny while other shows are thought-provoking.
7:To be franc,I am inclined to side with the later.8:I believe that all Chinese people have been accustomed to appreciating this night show,and it has become part of our tradition.9:I hope the CCTV Gala will add more flavor and pleasure to our Spring Festival in the years to come.
六:小结
作文夺高分,在不跑题的基础上,内容虽重要,但关键是语言的包装。在写作过程中或事后检查时,将相同的词换成同义词,上意词或代词,小词换成大词,概括的词换成具体的词,名词前面加形容词,形容词前面加副词,名词前面加同位语或后置定语,动词前加副词;简单句可以按照他们之间的关系进行连接,变成并列句或者主从复合句。分数就可以上升了!