
英语写作的万能公式
·开头的万能公式
1.开头万能公式一:名人名言
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办,编!
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理哟!而且没准我们将来就是名人呢!
经典句型:
As proverb says, “you are only young once.’’(适用于已记住的名言)
It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编ry名言)
更多经典句型:
As everyone knows, no one can deny that……
2.开头万能公式二:数字统计
原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是考试的时候哪管三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:
According to a recent survey, about 78.5% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.
看起来这个数字文绉绉的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:、
Honesty
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
Travel by bike
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
Youth
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余空间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
Five-day work week better than six-day work
根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日
更多句型:
A recent statistic shows that……
·结尾万能公式:
1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论
比如下面的例子:
Obviously (此为过渡短句),we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
更多过渡短语:
To sum up,in conclusion,in brief ,on account of this ,thus
更多句型
Thus, it can be concluded that …/ Therefore, we can find that…
2结尾万能公式二:如此建议
经典的虚拟语气句型
Obviously, it is a high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
·写作的“七项基本原则”:
一.长短句原则:工作一张一弛,老让读者读长句,累死人!写一个短小精辟的句子,相反,却可以起到画龙点睛的作用。如果我们把短句放在段首或段末,也可以揭示主题: As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
二.主题句原则:国有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否则会给人群龙无首之感!相信各位一定都读过一些破烂文学,故意把主题句隐藏在文章之内,结果造成我们稀里糊涂,不知所云。所以奉劝各位,一定要写主题句放在文章开头(保险型)或者结尾,让读者一目了然,必会平安无事!
特别提示:隐藏主题句是可是要冒险的!
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam.(主题句)
三.一二三原则:领导讲话总是第一部分、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点……如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的标签来判定你的文章是否结构清楚,条理自然。破解方法很简单,只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点之前就清楚了。
1)First ,second, third, last (不推荐,原因:俗)
2)Firstly ,secondly, thirdly, finally (不推荐,原因:俗)
3)The first, the second, the third, the last(不推荐,原因:俗)
4)In the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly(不推荐,原因:俗)
5)To begin with, then , furthermore, finally (强烈推荐)
6)To start with, next, in addition, finally (强烈推荐)
7)First and foremost, besides, last but not least <最后但不是不重要的>(强烈推荐)
8)Most important of all, moreover<此外>,finally (强烈推荐)
9)On the one hand , on the other hand (适用于两点的情况)
10)For one thing, for another thing (适用于两点的情况)
四.短句优先:
写作时,尤其是在考试时,如果使用短语,有两个好处:其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点,如果老师们看到你的文章太简单,看不到一个自己不认识的短语,必然会看你低一等。相反,如果发现亮点-精彩的短语,那么你的文章定会得高分了。 其二、关键时刻思维短路,只有凑字数,怎么办?用短语是一个办法!比如:
I cannot bear it. ------------------(用短语表达) I cannot put up with it.
I want it. ----------------(用短语表达) I am looking forward to it.
五.多实少虚原则:
原因很简单,写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西,不要空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词,少用虚词。我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们说一个很好的时候,就不应该说nice这样空洞的词,应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之类的形容词。再比如:
走出房间,general的词是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room
小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room
小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room
老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room
所以多用实词,少用虚词,文章会大放异彩!
六.多变句式原则
1)加法(串联):都希望写下很长的句子,像个老外似的,可就是怕写错,怎么办,最保险的写长句的方法就是这些,可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后句子有先后关系或并列关系。比如说:I enjoy music and he is fond of playing the guitar. 如果二者并列的,我们可以用一个超级句式:
Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其他短语也可以用:besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
2)转折(拐弯抹角)
批评某人缺点的时候,我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点,然后转入正题,再说缺点,这种方式虽然阴险了点,可毕竟还比较容易让人接受。所以呢,我们说话的时候,只要在要点之前先来点废话。
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短语:
Despite that,still,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,notwithstanding
3)因果(so, so, so)
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短语:
Then,therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(头重脚轻,或者头轻脚重)
其实质就是主语从句,表语从句,宾语从句的变形。
Eg:This is what I can do .
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分:
When to go…. Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一举):其实质就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr. Liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going
其实很简单,同位语---要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成;定语从句----借用之前的关键词并且用其从新组成一个句子插入其中,但是whom or that关键词必须要跟紧在先行词之前。
6)排比(排山倒海):
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此,如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话,那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句,一个个的对偶句,一个个的不定式,一个个的词,一个个的短语,如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and the ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.
七.挑战极限原则
既然挑战极限,必然是比较难的,但不是高不可攀!
原理:在学生的文章中,很少发现诸如主格的句子,其实也很简单,只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会,它就是分词的一种特殊形式,分词要求主语一致,而主格则不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
写作绝招
文章主体段落三大杀手锏:
一、举实例
思维短路,举实例!提出一个观点,举实例!提出一个方案,举实例!而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式,任何情况下,只要我们无法继续文章,不管三七二十一,尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colors, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fine him or her.rast
更多句型:
To take …as an example….One example is…,another example id…,for example
二、作比较
方法:写完一个要点,比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点,再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹,没有同样的树叶,文章亦同,只有通过比较,你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语:
相似的比较:
In comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较:
On the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with……
三、换言之
没话说了,可以换一句话在说,让你的文章多一些字,或者文绉绉的说,是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我们举过的例子:
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it.
因此也可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短语:
In more difficult language, in simpler …
