全文第一段:
The discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade.People’s opinions are divergent on such a complex and controversial issue.The author declares that_____,however,it oversimplifies this topic,The final judgment,in my point of view,should depend on a case-by-case analysis.
引出话题,改写原题,同时表达自己分析这个问题的方法或者自己的基本的态度。
全文第二段(正文第一段)
正文段的每段的第一句话都应该是主题句。
自己观点的第一个分支理由:
First and foremost, at the risk of sounding too simplistic,my main proposition for this issue can be summarized in one saying that___.What is more, I approve the statement that___without reservations in respect that___.As a consequence,it is imperative that____.Let’s bring our discussion here to a more present and practical context,it can be given a concrete example:____.Meanwhile,according to a rencent survey,we can estimate that_____.
要体会文章的逻辑如何延续,怎样不断地对逻辑设置下一个环节,再次一个环节以及最后一个环节,不断地让其存在联系。
全文第三段
自己观点的第二个分支理由:
From the personal perspective,another essential factor why I advocate____relates to/involves the realm of_____.No one can deny the fact that____.Moving on to wider themes,___.History is replete with evidence to illustrate this point.A notable case in point in that___.
如果后面有一层类比:
By the same token/Similarly,_____.
全文第四段(正文第三段)
任何事物再好,但过度了也会有弊端。
文章在此处可以进行一个适当的让步,也可以将文章的整个体系颠倒过来。
如:在开头段讲述某事物的弊端或反对某观点,正文中逐段阐述自己的理由,之后可以转折说,我们必须要承认的是适当的_____也会带来一定的好处。
若该文采取前面是支持,后面是进行适度的反驳的混合态度:
However,we should concede that despite the merits of____mentioned above,it is undisputed that overextended___will be counterproductive,even harmful.The harm it produces is,in my view,both palpable and profound.For the individual,it has a debasing impact on___;For the society,it may promite the tendency that___.
该文把握了混合态度,并具有层次性。
全文第五段(正文第四段)
该段主要讲述怎样做才能消除有可能带来的负面因素。
旧观点,新观点题型:先提出旧观点,然后紧接着提出新观点。
作者永远是在赞同新观点,但是未必是完全赞同。
作者在提出旧和旧观点后,又指出新观点的瑕疵,这样绝对不会影响作者对于新观点的支持的主态度。之后在一个小段落中或用几句话,针对这些瑕疵提出一些措施以弥补或消除。
To successfully curd such unfavorable rends,several efficacious steps should be taken into consideration seriously in couse,In the first place,we should appeal to the government to work out relevant regulations to___.In the second place,we should cultivate and enhance people’s awareness that___.In the third place,___should pour more investment into some fields.
全文第六段(结尾)
From what I have discussed above,we may safely come to the conclusion that__,not only because___,but also because___,but it depends on___.
最后一句再映射开头的一句话:
The final judgment,should depend on a case-by-case analysis.
中间四段:正文段
前两段从正面论述,或者说是第一、儿层面的支持理由;第三段进行适当的让步,阐述过度产生的负面影响;第四段针对上段所说的效果给出一些有效的解决方法和措施。
建议:灵活使用,要替换其中的用词,或者通过该文只是去掌握八股文的结构或概念。语言和内容表达要灵活并具有个性、多样化,而不是套用模板。