一、告知信:传统体育项目交流课
假定你是李华,你班计划与新西兰姊妹学校某班级在线共上一堂介绍“传统体育项目”的交流课。请你代表班级写封邮件给对方班长Hans,内容包括:1. 交流的目的;2. 告知相关事宜;3. 征求意见。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段开门见山交代写作目的——告知项目交流课相关事宜;第二段介绍交流目的(要点1)并告知线上交流课的具体内容(要点2);第三段征求意见(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Dear Hans,
I am Li Hua. On behalf of my class, Id ’like to inform you of our upcoming online exchange course on Traditional Sports.
This course aims to promote the exchange on sports culture s between China and New Zealand, and help students of the two schools learn more about the traditional sports of the two countries. Our school is intended to introduce Taichi, Chinese chess and table tennis, which are perfect combination of movement and stillness in sports. With the purpose of immersing the students into the featured events, the online exchange course, which could be scheduled at the end of March, may as well run for 2 hours.
We’re wondering if our proposal is practicable. Looking forward to your early reply. (122 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的汉斯,
我是李华,我代表班级告知你我们即将举办的在线“传统体育项目”交流课相关事宜。
这节线上课旨在促进中国和新西兰两国体育文化交流,促进两校学生进一步了解两国的传统体育项目。我们学校打算介绍太极拳、中国象棋和乒乓球这三项充分体现体育中动与静的完美结合。为了让两校同学充分感受两国的传统特色体育项目,此次线上交流课建议时长为2小时,时间可以定在三月底。
我们的提议是否可行?期待你的早日回复。
李华
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为告知信;
(2)因李华代表班级告知相关事宜,故李华身份要交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为介绍传统体育项目的相关事宜,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)inform sb of sth告知某人某事;
(2)aim to do sth旨在...;
(3)be intended to do sth打算做某事;
(4)with the purpose of doing sth为了;
(5)immerse sb into使某人沉浸式体验...;
(6)featured有特色的;
(7)be scheduled at计划定在;
(8)may as well do sth=had better do sth还是...的好,表示征求意见,语气较委婉。
二、欢迎稿:护眼专家讲座
假设你是李华, 你校邀请在福建医科大学工作的外籍眼科专家Tim教授到校开设关于如何保护眼睛的讲座,作为校学生会,请根据以下内容用英文写一段欢迎稿,内容如下:1.教授简介;2.讲座意义;3.表示欢迎。
注意:1.词数80左右:2.不得出现真实姓名和学校名字;3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般将来时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段表示欢迎;第二段介绍教授(要点1)、讲座内容和讲座意义(要点2);第三段再次表示欢迎(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
I’m greatly honored to be here, on behalf of our school, to extend our warmest and sincere welcome to Professor Tim who is to give us a lecture today.
Professor Tim, known as an eye specialist at Fujian Medical University, will give us a special lecture on how to protect our eyes. He will give a vivid account of the causes of shortsightedness with beautiful illustrations and credible facts, as well as the measures to prevent it. The lecture will help enhance our awareness of loving and protecting our eyes, and focus our attention on the significance of developing good habits of using our eyes.
Let's give a big clap to Professor Tim again for his wonderful lecture. (118 words)
【中文翻译】
大家下午好!我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天,我们在这里为她举行欢送会。
亲爱的同学们:
我很荣幸在这里代表学校,向今天来为我们做讲座的蒂姆教授表示最热烈和诚挚的欢迎。
蒂姆教授是福建医科大学的外籍眼科专家。他今天将就如何保护眼睛为题做一个专题讲座,向我们介绍引起近视的原因及预防措施。讲座将有助于增强我们爱眼、护眼的意识,让大家认识到养成良好卫生习惯的重要性。
让我们再一次以热烈的掌声欢迎蒂姆为我们带来精彩讲座。
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为欢迎稿;
(2)因文体是欢迎稿,故李华身份在正文中不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分介绍教授及其讲座内容和意义,故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)be greatly honored to do sth做某事深感荣幸;
(2)known as以...而为人所知;
(3)give a vivid account of生动描述;
(4)as well as不但...,而且...;
(5)focus our attention on让我们关注...;
(6)give a big clap to sb以热烈的掌声(欢迎)。
三、投稿:My Understanding of Optimism
假定你是李华,你校的英语报正在征稿。请你结合以下名人名言,写一篇题为“My Understanding of Optimism”的征文。
“The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity; the optimist sees opportunity in every difficulty. "—Winston Churchill
内容包括:1.你对该名言的理解:2.结合生活实例:3.你对该名言的感悟。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80词左右(名言不计入总词数);2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段表述对名言的理解(要点1);第二段结合生活实例阐述自己的理解(要点2);第三段陈述对名言的感悟(要点3)。
【参考范文】
My Understanding of Optimism
Winston Churchill once said, "The pessimist sees difficulty in every opportunity; the optimist sees opportunity in every difficulty." There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes. Being aware that optimism is good doesn’t mean knowing how to keep an optimistic attitude.
January saw my Gaokao for the first time with a poor academic performance. I was so frustrated as not to focus on my studies. I blamed my failures on the effects of the pandemic, on not trying hard enough, to name just a few. It was my friend who helped me out. His optimistic attitude has always impressed me, so that I learned to see opportunities in difficulties.
Optimism, I’m convinced, is achieved through hard work, for only by working hard can I overcome all the impossible in my life and create one miracle after another! (121 words)
【中文翻译】
大家下午好!我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天,我们在这里为她举行欢送会。
我对乐观主义的理解
丘吉尔曾说过,“悲观者在每个机会中都看到困难;乐观者在每一个困难中都看到机会。”一千个读者就有一千个哈姆雷特,每个人都持有不同的态度。人人都知乐观好,却不知该如何保持乐观的态度。
我在一月份参加了第一次高考,考得不好。我异常沮丧以至于无法再集中精力继续学习。我把自己的失败归咎于疫情的影响,归咎于自己不够努力,等等等等。是我的朋友帮我走了出来。他的乐观态度一直感染着我,让我学会了在困难中看到机遇。
我相信,乐观是奋斗出来的,因为只有奋斗才能战胜生命中的种种不可能,才能创造出一个又一个的奇迹。
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为投稿;
(2)因文体是投稿,故李华身份在正文中不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分介绍我的生活实例,故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时和一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's eyes.莎士比亚的名言,意为“一千个读者,就有一千个哈姆雷特。”
(2)January swas my Gaokao ...运用无灵主语的写法;
(3)with a poor academic performance意为“考得不好,考砸了”;
(4)so frustrated as not to do sth=so frustrated that sb can't do sth
(5)to name just a few意为“仅举几例”,往往用于表达列举一连串的省略写法,通常放在列举的名词末尾;
(6)It was .. who ...运用了强调句结构;
(7)I'm convinced意为“我相信”,此处作为插入语用;
(8)Optimism is achieved through hard work.“乐观都是奋斗出来的”,此句灵感源于总的新年致辞金句Happiness is achieved through hard work.“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。
(9)only by working hard can I ...运用了部分倒装结构,产生倒装的前提是Only+状语(从句)置于句首。
四、倡议信:低碳生活
假定你是校学生会李华,你校正在举办“低碳周”活动,请你在学生大会上做一个发言。内容包括:1.校园内的浪费现象;2.低碳生活的倡议。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段描述校园浪费现象(要点1),并开门见山表明写作目的——发出倡议;第二段说明低碳生活倡议的内容(要点2);第三段呼吁低碳生活。
【参考范文】
Dear boys and girls,
Green and low-carbon life, as is known to all, has become a new fashion. Now everywhere you look around the campus, there is nothing but waste, ranging from our diet to study and daily supplies. It's high time for us to live a low-carbon life.
Clean Plate Campaign always comes first, and keep in mind that never waste food when dining. It is also a must to make full use of paper by using both sides. Plus, say no to the waste of water and electricity, and develop the habit of turning off the lights when they are not in use.
Let's go green now and we believe every individual’s small effort can make a big difference! (117 words)
【中文翻译】
亲爱的同学们,
众所周知,绿色低碳生活已经成为一种新时尚。现在校园里从饮食到学习生活用品,目光所及随处可见浪费。我们是时候该低碳生活了。
首先我们要践行光盘行动,就餐时绝不浪费食物。其次,我们还要充分利用纸张的正反面,做到物尽其用。此外,我们还要拒绝水电,并养成不使用时关灯的习惯。
让我们一起低碳生活,我们相信大家的小努力定会产生大影响!
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为倡议信;
(2)因文本是倡议信,故作者身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为倡议低碳生活,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)as is known to all定语从句用作插入语;
(2)everywhere you look around ..., there is nothing but ...目光所及,皆是(垃圾);
(3)ranging from ... to ...从...到...范围不等;
(4)... always comes first总是第一位的;
(5)It is also a must to do sth做某事也是必须的;
(6)Plus此外;
(7)say no to=refuse拒绝;
(8)every individual's small effort can make a big difference运用small和big的对比写法增强语气。