1.牛郎织女的生活(牛郎和大哥大嫂、金牛星)
牛郎放牛、黄牛托梦
2.牛郎织女相见(牛郎、织女和众姐妹)
众女洗澡、牛郎偷衣、织女留凡
3.王母来找织女并强行带走她 以及银河出现(牛郎织女、王母)
王母带走织女、牛郎追赶、划钗为河
4.鹊桥传说(一男一女)
男女在七夕诉说这段凄美的爱情故事
NiuLang And ZhiNv
主要人物:
牛郎NL
织女ZN
大哥DG
大嫂DS
黄牛HN
其他仙女XN
王母WM
一男MAN
一女WOMON
道具:
start
Fairy Of The Magpie Bridge (鹊桥仙诗词朗诵)
Among the beautiful clouds,
Over the heavenly river,
Crosses the weaving maiden.
A night of rendezvous,
Across the autumn sky.
Surpasses joy on earth.
Moments of tender love and dream,
So sad to leave the magpie bridge.
Eternal love between us two,
Shall withstand the time apart.
Scene 1
DG DS NL HN
1
DG: you,quickly!it’s time to herd the cattle!
DS:so it is!you must quikly,and you can back till night!
NL:OK.(then take the cattle and out)
2
NL:my dear cattle!how should I have so cruel fate!
HN:(mei…)
NL: if only I have a better life!
(then NL went to sleep,suddenly he awake)
HN:master!
NL:how,how can you speak!!
HN:don’t be startled.you are in you dream.i am the king of Halcyone Taurus.my little master.i am here to tell you a messege.Tomorrow,7beautiful fairy maidens will go down from the heaven to have a wash in the lake we often went to .if you take one clothes of the gilrs and hide it ,you will have a wife!
(then NL awaken)
NL:is it true?(ask to the cattle)
HN: (mei..)
(then they went)
Scene 2
N(1 2 3) ZN NL
1
(One day, Weaver and the sky realm where the game together, bathe in the river,)
N1: wow!how comfortable !we can have a nice day !
N2: yes! I like here !see that beautiful mountain that water ? It’s towering!
ZN:of course .if we can stay just what we have been forever ,I think ,it is really really better than we go back to continue to be weaver .just like the common people .but now
Although ,we can not be live forever .it just like a hell for us .do not you
N1&N2&N3:yes,it is true
N3: oh my sisters ,hurry up! We can’t stay for too much time!
ZN: yes,mom will know if we are not back in time!
(they take down the clothes and go to wash)
(NL went here and take one clothes )
ZN:where is my clothes?
N1:your clothes is lost ,we must back in them.you can’t go now with out the clothes of weaver !
ZN: oh, my god! How can I do now!
N2: it’s a bad thing,but sorry .we can not do but to pray for you
N3: so we will cheat mom that you have something to do .we must go now or will be late!
ZN: you go first and I ‘ll find it.
(the other gilrs went)
Where is my clothes ?where?
(NL suddenly know he must come out to tell her that he get her clothes ,yes ,he does what he think)
NL:hi ,girl ,is it yours?
ZN:yeah ,it is mime ,it is mine !thank you .but because there is no time for me to stay here ,I must go .I will remember you .bye .
NL:I have heard what you had said each other ,why can not you make effort to give yourself happiness?my fate is cruel .but I know i can make my life .and I am the god of my life .so i want to tell you .do yourself ,ok?
If you want help ,i can help you ,it is not far from my home
(ZN feel that it is true ,although common people can do .why i?of course ,NL is handsome and seems honest)
ZN:you just say you can help me .butt how can we define us for living together .
NL:well .I think ,this is the fate for us to meet here ,if you can ingonore the position .and ,and i will marry you .do you want to marry me
ZN(shyness):yes .i d o
Now they live better and happy.and they have two lovely children.but the happiness is short for us ,and what left is sorrows,because the news is given to WM by someone and that sisters can not cheat anymore .so ZN was arrested to the heaven ,now she is before her cruel mom
Scene 3
NL ZN WM
1
(ZN was weaving and WM came)
WM: how should you dare!you marry a mortal(凡人) and you break the low!!
ZN: mom,I could’t live without him.please permit us..
WM: no way!!i will take you back to the heaven and you will have the greatist punish!
ZN: oh, mom!
(WM put a magic on ZN and take ZN alway)
2
(NL saw what happen and try his best to catch up)
ZN: help me! honey
NL: you evil! relieve my wife!
WM: your destiny is exhausted!
NL: NO!I beg you to relieve my wife!please!
WM: back!you silly man!
(WM take her hairpin and paddle it and a long river appears)
NL: oh !you are devil ! release my wife!
ZN:dear husband!
MUSIC2(刘德华 牧笛)
Scene 4
MEN & GILR
(a couple of young came)
Man: my sweat heart! the story is finished. Do you like it?
Women: oh,it’s beautiful and sad. I love it! They are so poor!
Men: don’t be so sad ,my dear! I will love you for ever and no one can separate us!
Women: I know. I love you too.
END
分析:(发动你们班的高手给修正一下)
1 开场要怎么弄
2 中间是需要加入牛郎织女恩爱生活片段
3 scene2-2怎么弄比较合适
4 改动一些认为不好的句子 添加一些好的场景对话
5 想一下此故事的主题是什么
6 把每一个场景对话再弄详细一点
7 准备道具(想一下都有啥需要,比如扁担?最后牛郎追织女时候貌似还有挑着儿女的细节以及黄牛死后牛皮为他腾云驾雾,是不是不需要,这个有点麻烦)
8 要不要有一些搞笑成分