
70年前,经过艰苦卓绝的斗争,世界反法西斯战争取得了伟大胜利,这是正义的胜利,是全世界热爱和平事业人民的胜利。
【原文】
今年是世界反法西斯战争胜利70周年,也是中国人民抗日战争胜利70周年。中国人民浴血奋战14年,最终取得了世界反法西斯战争的伟大胜利。为保护人类文明、捍卫世界和平做出巨大贡献。中国希望同广大同盟国共同回顾总结历史,展望开辟未来,坚定铭记历史、永不再战的庄严承诺,构建以合作共赢为核心的新型国际关系,让世界更加和平,更加和谐,更加美好。
【参考译文】
It is the 70th anniversary of both the world's anti-fascism war and the victory of China's Resistance War against Japanese Aggression this year. The Chinese people finally achieved the great victory of the anti-fascist war of the world after an everlasting bloody battle for 14 years. They made a great contribution for the protection of human civilization and the dependence of the world peace. China hopes to review history and look forward to the future together with its allies. To insist on remembering the history and the promise of never to fight will be their common goal. Only in this way can they build a brand new international relation, with win-win cooperation as its core, and make the world a more peaceful, more harmonious, more beautiful place to live in.
题目:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then give your comments. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【审题构思】
这是一篇图画类作文,要求考生描述图画,并做出评论。此类作文一般为三段式。即第一段简单描述图画的内容及内涵,第二段就图画的内容展开评论,并表明自己的观点,第三段重申自己的看法并提出建议。考生在评论和表明自己的观点时,一定要思路清晰,且要表达清楚。
【参考范文】
In the picture above, a child flies from one cage to the other cage like a bird.One cage is named school, and the other is named cram school. What a sarcastic picture. There is no freedom left for the children who cannot enjoy the supposed cheerful vacation.
Why cannot the children enjoy the vacation that belongs to them? Who push the children from one cage to the other? What should we do to help the trapped children? The three questions solved, the above picture will not exist any more. The answer to the first question is hidden with the superficial one being acquiring more knowledge, and the fundamental one is that parents demand more scores from their children. They expect their children to be able to score more through attending various cram schools at the cost of their children’s supposedly splendid vocation. So it is the parents who pursue quick success that push the children from one cage to the other. To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.
As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted. Therefore, we should emancipate the children in the mind and return the joy of childhood to children gradually.
【高分词汇与词组】
supposed 本该的
trapped 受困的
attend various cram schools 参加各种辅导班
pursue quick success 急功近利
【句型替换】
To free the children, the parents should put emphasis on the children’s physical and mental health rather than the score.
=To set the children free , the parents should emphasize the children’s physical and mental well-being rather than the score.
As is known to all that pursuit of high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be uprooted.
=As we all know that pursuing high scores has long been a phenomenon in China, the cause of this phenomenon is hard to be eradicated.
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