
一、命题分析与真题回顾
命题分析
1.分值
满分15分(占试卷总分的十分之一)
2.题型特点
词数80左右,为使行文连贯可适当增加细节。
3.能力考查
在考查考生遣词造句、布局谋篇能力的同时,更加侧重考查考生的交际能力以及利用所学的知识解决实际问题的能力。
4.评分原则
1.本题总分为15分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3.词数少于60和多于100的,从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是衡量语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
5.浙江省真题回顾
| 年份 | 体裁 | 题材 |
| 2016.10 | 邮件 | 向自己即将入住的寄宿家庭介绍和咨询 |
| 2017.6 | 邮件 | 邀请外国朋友一起郊游 |
| 2017.11 | 书信 | 邀请外国友人过春节 |
| 2018.6 | 书信 | 应聘/申请做志愿者接待外国友人 |
1.卷面上 2.结构上:问题不辨,结构混乱
3.内容上 :要点不全 4 语言上:语法错误,汉语式思维
对策:1. 书面上:认真、清楚、规范书写
2.结构上:仔细审题,明确格式 分分段落,结构清晰,注意过渡词的使用
3.内容上:仔细思索,考虑全面;观点深刻,见解独特
4.语言上:仔细研读范文,夯实语言基础,在语法正确的基础上用复杂的句子表达简单的思想。
5.‘熟能生巧’多练习。
三、四种常见类型文体的写作
(1)邀请信
邀请信一般是邀请某人出席某仪式、参加某活动的信件或电子邮件。
内容结构一般分为:
1、进行自我介绍、问候寒暄;
2、清楚地表达邀请的意图以及具体时间、地点、场合,以及被邀请人需要做什么准备、会进行哪些活动等;
3、表达期待之意,以及联系方式等。需要注意,邀请信中时态常用一般现在时和一般将来时。
(2 )常用模板
开头:
It is my greatest pleasure/ honor that I'm writing to invite you to_, which will be held at_ on_
I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in…
I am writing on behalf of the English Department to invite you to give a lecture in our college.
It would give us great pleasure if you could deliver a speech on the topic of ___ I am sure that it would be beneficial to ____ if ___.
结尾: We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation. I’m looking forward to your reply .
(2)申请信
申请信有很多种,比如求职申请、加入某组织、活动的申请、报考申请、学位或留学申请等等。其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等,所以个人情况的介绍应该是求职信的核心内容,应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处,以便留下好印象,获得面谈的机会。
内容结构一般分为三部分:
1.点明目的,自我介绍,指出信息来源
2.详述个人优势,简述个人要求。
3.表达感谢,简述获准后打算,期待对方优先考虑
(2 )常用模板
开头:I have learned from your advertisement in the newspapers/micro-blog/websit that your company is in need of a typist this summer vacation. I would like to apply for the position/job/chance because I believe I am a suitable person for the job.
中间:The reason is that not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for this position. On the one hand, ____. On the other hand, I also have some experience in_____________(曾有过的社会工作经验)。⑧You will find me to be the only person fit for this position.
结尾: I would appreciate it very much if you could give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.
或:Hopefully,the chance would be offered to me .if so, I would devoted all my effort and wisdom to your company/activity.
I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
(3)建议信
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
内容结构一般分为:
1、表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单介绍自己,注意语气。
2、应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让别人以为你是在投诉。
3、对提出的建议进行总结。要注意有礼貌,使读者容易接受。
(2 )常用模板
开头:I am writing to express my views concerning…
It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on…
中间:If I were you, I would…
It seems to me that you could…
I think it would be more beneficial if you could…
In short / In any case, we should / must / ought to…
What we need is…/ It is suggested that...
结尾:I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical / useful /helpful.
I'll appreciate you taking my suggestion into account. /In the end, I will be very glad if you will find my suggestions helpful.
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
[我希望你会认为这些建议有用,我将准备好与你讨论这件事情进一步的细节。]
Good Luck with your_______(祝愿)
[祝你的____好运]
(4)口头通知
通知有多种分类。从形式上可分为书面通知(written notice)和口头通知(announcement)。书面通知用词正式,用大词较多,同时,用于书面化,可以使用一些长句;而口头通知以言简意赅为主要特点,用词表达较为口语化。在语言上,口头通知多用简单句和祈使句.
口头通知的开头往往有称呼语(被通知的对象),以及提醒听众注意倾听的开场白。常见的开场白有:
·Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, may I have your attention, please?
·Attention, please! There will be ...
·Excuse me, everyone! I'd like to tell you that ...
Now everybody! Excuse me if I interrupt you. But I have an announcement to make.
·Boys and girls, I have an announcement to make.
·Please excuse my interrupting you, but I have something important to tell you.
常见的结束语有:
·That's all. Thank you.
·Thank you for listening.
·OK. That's all. Wish you a pleasant journey.
四、写作练习
