2022年高考新题型读后续写素材练习答案解析汇总！

1．阅读下⾯材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成⼀篇完整的短⽂。续写的词数应为150左右。

Once upon a time, in a small village in Turkey, there lived a mother and her son.The son was known by all as Bald Boy because even though he was still quite young he had no hair on his head at all.

Bald Boy and his mother were very poor indeed and so each day Bald Boy would take up his basket and went out into the woods in search of food.

One day, as he was searching the forest floor for mushrooms, Bald Boy was sure that he could hear a young girl crying.When he looked up he noticed a little squirrel(松⿏）sitting on the branch of the tree above his h When at last the squirrel stopped crying,the two friends got to talking and the Bald Boy explained how he lived with his mother and how they were very poor.

'I need to come into this forest each day in search of food because we have no money,'he told the squirrel.

It was then that the little squirrel said,'You have been very kind to me today so I am going to help you in return.'

Then the little squirrel jumped out of Bald Boy's hands and said,'Follow me.' The young boy followed the squirrel through the forest for many hours until they reached a cliff edge(悬崖边） that could see the green vall 'You must climb down this cliff,'said the squirrel.'When you reach the bottom you will find the Forest Queen.

She will ask you three questions and you must answer them all correctly to receive the prize.'

注意：

1. 所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder and whispered...

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'If you do not answer correctly,'she said in her cold voice,'then...

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The squirrel climbed up onto Bald Boy's shoulder and whispered the answers to the three questions in his ear. Then she jumped down and ran back into the forest.Bald Boy made himself a rope,then climbed down th Paragraph 2:

'If you do not answer correctly,'she said in her cold voice,'then you will lose your head.''How many cherries are growing on this tree?''Where is the middle of the earth?''Which is the heavier of these two apples?' Confi 【解析】

【分析】

本篇书⾯表达是读后续写。⽂章主要讲述⽣活在⼀个⼩村庄⾥的秃头男孩和他的母亲相依为命，并且很贫穷。⼀天，这个秃头男孩遇到⼀个哭的伤⼼的⼩松⿏并安慰它，⼩松⿏受到感动决定帮助男孩的故事。

【详解】

续写第⼀段开头为：松⿏爬上秃头男孩的肩膀，⼩声说……后⾯应该写⼩松⿏怎么帮助秃头男孩去获取奖励，男孩怎样到达悬崖底部见到森林⼥王的过程。

续写第⼆段开头为：“如果你答错了，”她⽤冰冷的声⾳说，“那么……后⾯应该写秃头男孩回答上森林⼥王的问题，最终获得奖励，回到家中和他妈妈分享喜悦。

【点睛】

⽂章主题部分选⽤的是⼀般过去时，续写部分也⽤⼀般过去时，通篇时态把握准确；词语运⽤恰当并且⾼级，显⽰出较⾼的英语能⼒；⽂章中还使⽤⼤量的复合句，为⽂章增加⾊彩和⾼级感，如Bald Boy made himse 准掌握了从句使⽤的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接⾃然，思路清晰⾃然，表达完整，为⼀篇优秀的作品。

2．阅读下⾯材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成⼀篇完整的短⽂。续写的词数应为150左右。

Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.

One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when she saw the price, her heart sa a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny paid off the pearls.

Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh, yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the litt father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”

A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your 注意：

1. 所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.

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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.

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Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands holding the necklace ti father’s hands determinedly.

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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a t 【解析】

【分析】

本篇书⾯表达考查读后续写。根据所给短⽂和段⾸句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

读后续写主要以故事类⽂本为主，考⽣在阅读时，不应该⾛马观花看情节，⽽应找出⽂章的六要素（who, when, where, what, how, why），然后将每个主要事件都⽤六要素串联成⼀句话。这样⼀来，冗长的故事就成理推断这个起因会导致的可能结果；只有确定了故事的转折，考⽣才能合理地将故事发展下去。不过，在设计情节时，同样要考虑六要素，将它们串联成⼀句话，再将这句话添砖加⽡变成段落。在语⾔⽅⾯，注意主谓【点睛】

范⽂内容完整，结构严谨，要点全⾯，语⾔规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下⽂意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范⽂中使⽤了⾼级句⼦When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent-minded, with her hands h 为⽂章增⾊不少，⽽且全⽂中没有中国式英语的句式，显⽰了很⾼的驾驭英语的能⼒。另外，⽂章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换⾃然，为⽂章增⾊添彩。

3．阅读下⾯材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成⼀篇完整的短⽂。续写的词数应为150左右。

We moved on into the jungle-- a forest where large numbers of tall trees and plants grow very close together. Old Mali went in front and I followed close behind him. We stopped for the night about an hour before it be Old Mali lit a fire. When it was bight he showed me how to make a bed with moss（青苔，苔藓）.

It was soft and comfortable.

―Mali, how did you learn to make such a bed? I asked.

―I learned to make beds like that, Mali replied, ―by watching and listening to others. That is the real way to learn anything.

―Will you let me watch you always? I asked Old Mali. ―I want to learn all the things you know about the jungle.

When we had finished our supper, Old Mali got onto his bed and lay down. It was now completely dark. In the fire light, Old Mali seemed to be fast asleep on his bed. I suddenly felt alone and afraid.

All day in the jungle, while we had been walking, I had heard noises of animals. Now they seemed to be much nearer. The jungle was now a wall of blackness in the light of the fire.

I felt frightened and suddenly my mouth went dry. I wanted to scream. I felt my mouth opening wide, ready to scream as loud as possible.

But I did not scream. I saw Old Mali’s face in the firelight. This made me feel ashamed. I held my teeth tightly together to stop myself from screaming. I lay down and closed my eyes.

As soon as I closed my eyes. I heard a thousand noises. The whole jungle became alive with animals moving quietly and carefully all around me. Suddenly Old Mali took a deep breath and made a noise. I was heari I opened my eyes and jumped out of bed. I pulled my knife out and held it above my head.

注意：

1. 所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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I was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire.

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Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better.

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I was going to see if there was a wild animal beside the fire. Through the burning fire, I believed I saw its sharp teeth and cruel red eyes. Its craws would insert into my flash without mercy as soon as I came into its sig Paragraph 2:

Old Mali’s quiet calm voice made me feel better. Adjusting breath quickly and observing carefully, I found the “animal” was just the shade of trees. I laughed in relief and told Old Mali what had happened just now. Ha 【解析】

【分析】

本篇书⾯表达考查读后续写。根据所给短⽂和段⾸句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

本篇书⾯表达考查读后续写。根据所给短⽂和段⾸句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

通读短⽂可知，作者跟随着Old Mali进⼊了丛林。夜⾊降临，吃完晚饭作者和 Old Mali各⾃休息，但作者⼀闭上眼睛就听到各种动物的声⾳，续写由此展开。第⼀段以“我去看看⽕边有没有野兽”开始，所以接下来要叙【点睛】

本篇范⽂层次清晰，要点全⾯，表达流畅，句⼦结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。⽂中使⽤⼀些极佳的词语和句⼦为⽂章增⾊。使⽤⾼级句型有：…if there was a wild animal beside the fire和as soon as I ca 从句；Exhausted, I closed my eyes, and knowing Old Mali was watching,…使⽤了形容词作伴随状语和⾮谓语动词结构；That night was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.使⽤了so…that…引导

4．阅读下⾯材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成⼀篇完整的短⽂。续写的词数应为150左右。

At Dana’s yard sale, Tim chose a baseball from the toys spread on the card table and asked about the price. Dana told him everything was a quarter except Nezumi, a cotton toy rat. It was grey with some cotton sticki “Nezumi is extra special, so he is ten dollars. He needs a safe new home.” Dana sighed. Tim laughed saying he didn’t have ten dollars. Dana laughed too and gave Nezumi to Tim as a free gift because he was her fr “Of course.” Dana said.

At home, Tim’s mother showed him the gift she had bought for Dana. It was a knitting spool(针织线轴) shaped like a mushroom. Mom said Dana could knit a scarf for her doll. Tim sighed that Dana wasn’t a knitting kin this ball.

The next day, Dana brought cupcakes to class. When she handed a cupcake to Tim, she asked if Tim brought Nezumi to school as Nezumi liked to ride in backpacks. Tim was at a loss because Nezumi was at home 注意:

1. 所续写的短⽂词数应为 150 左右;

2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。

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At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball.

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At home that afternoon, Tim stared at the plastic rat ball. Wondering about the use of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking up and down the room with a frown on his face. Mom was surprised and Paragraph 2:

All of a sudden, he had an idea. He lifted Nezumi and squeezing Nezumi into the plastic ball with great caution so that Nezumi would be safe from cats and dogs. Seeing this, Mom asked Tim whether he was giving D 【解析】

【分析】

本篇书⾯表达考查读后续写。根据所给短⽂和段⾸句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

通过阅读所给⽂章可知，Tim从Dana的庭院旧货出售会得到了有⼀只⽿朵被扯掉了的玩具⽼⿏Nezumi，Tim很喜欢。Dana的⽣⽇快到了，Tim去商店⾥为Dana喜欢的⽼⿏买了⼀个透明的塑料球，可以让它在⾥⾯跑，续写部分分为两段，第⼀段开头是：那天下午在家⾥，Tim盯着塑料⽼⿏球。所以后⽂应该是讲述Tim得知Dana不会受到⽼⿏作为⽣⽇礼物后的⼼理活动，他觉得买的这个塑料⽼⿏球没有⽤了，于是他皱着眉头开始在最后还要注意所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本⽂描写详略得当，使⽤了⾼级词汇和⾼级句⼦。如：walk up and down, not…but…, with great caution等⾼级词汇；Wondering about the use of the clear plastic ball if Dana had no rat, he started walking up and do

5．阅读下⾯材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成⼀篇完整的短⽂。续写的词数应为150左右。

Freddie woke up to see it was snowing-again. The world outside was white. Snow covered the roads, the cars, the houses, and even the driveway Freddie had just shoveled the day before.

“Ugh,” said Freddie. “No more snow!” He got out of bed and headed to the bathroom for his regular morning shower. As he reached for the taps, his mother appeared in the doorway.

“I’ve got news,” she said. “There’s been so much snow overnight that the roads are slippery and dangerous. I just heard on the radio that they canceled the school buses for the day.”

Freddie groaned. “Then how am I supposed to get to school?”

His mom grinned. “I guess you don’t. It’s a snow day!”

Freddie’s eyes lit up. He’d never had a snow day off from school before. What would he do first?

“I’m going back to bed!” Freddie headed back to his room and climbed under the covers. After a few minutes, he realized that it was too late. He was already wide awake. He headed down to the kitchen and then sat a After breakfast his mother suggested he go out and build a snowman. Freddie wasn’t too sure. He didn’t really like the cold and the snow. He’d rather stay inside and play video games.

“You can play afterward, but how about going outside for a little bit? It’s good to get some fresh air, and who knows, you might even enjoy yourself.” Freddie unwillingly put on the warm clothes and headed outside. Standing alone in the front yard, with the cold wind blowing, was not Freddie’s idea of a good time. Knowing his mom meant what she said, the boy sighed, thinking the quicker he completed his snowman, the faster h Moments later, he saw one of his friends appearing from his house up the street. Dion waddledout in his big snow trousers and heavy overcoat. He waved to Freddie.

“Hey there! I saw you out here and thought you might want company. Snow days are awesome!” Dion laughed.

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1. 所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.

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Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.

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Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate. “Yeah, sure. Help me make this snowman, would you?” Dion nodded, and they got to work, building the snowman a solid base and lifting a heavy snowball on t Paragraph 2:

Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house. Seeing snow full of Freddie’s face and coat, his mother couldn’t help laughing. “Are you ready to come in?” she asked. “Not yet, mom.” Freddie said. Still exc 【解析】

【分析】

本篇书⾯表达考查读后续写。根据所给短⽂和段⾸句，续写两段，词数要求为150词左右。

【详解】

前⽂主要讲的是主⼈公Freddie很懊恼下雪天，因为他可能⼜要为了保持道路畅通继续出去铲雪。不过，在得知学校由于连⽇积雪⽽停课时，Freddie激动不已，⼼想着终于可以宅在家⾥打游戏了。但是，妈妈坚持建议在给的第⼀段开头“Freddie was surprised but happy to see his classmate.”中“happy”⼀词可以想象两⼈⼀起成功地堆了雪⼈的⽽快乐场景；同时第⼆段开头“Delighted at the idea, Freddie excitedly ran into his house.”【⾼分句型⼀】

As Dion found some stones for buttons, Freddie stuck a couple of broken branches into the body to make arms. 当Dion找了⼀些⽯头做纽扣时，Freddie就把⼏根断了的树枝插进⾝体⾥做胳膊。运⽤时间状语从句。【⾼分句型⼆】

His mother agreed without hesitation because she knew Freddie enjoyed himself outside. 他的母亲毫不犹豫地同意了，因为她知道Freddie在外⾯玩得很开⼼。运⽤原因状语从句。

6．阅读下⾯材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成⼀篇完整的短⽂。续写的词数应为150左右。

Through our lives, we can gain a lot and lose so much. But being honest should always be with us, as honesty is always regarded as a virtue. Every time I talk about the topic, something crowds in my mind as if it had I was 16 when one morning, Dad told me I could drive him to Mijas and then take the car in a nearby garage to get it serviced. At that time, I had just passed the driving test, and I hardly had a chance to use the car, so I drove my father to Mijas, promising to pick him up again at 4 pm, then I went to a

nearby garage, and put the car in there. Since I had several hours to spare, I decided to go to a movie theater near the garage to see the movie. However, I was so absorbed in the plot of the movie that I forgot the time I thought my father would be very angry if he knew what I was doing. And he would never let me drive again. So I decided to make up an excuse. Then, I drove to the appointed place, my father was sitting in a corner, I would never forget the way he looked at me. “I'm very disappointed that you thought you had to lie to me, Jason.” My father looked at me again and said, “When you didn't show up on time, I called the gas station and 注意：

1. 所续写短⽂的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.

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A wave of guilt swept over me and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late. Dad listened carefully as a sadness passed through him，“I'm angry, not with you bu Paragraph 2:

But father, it's exactly eighteen miles home from here, and it's dark. You can't walk back. ' I begged. My protests, my apologies and the rest of my words were useless. I had let my father down. and I was about to learn faced.However it was also the most successful lesson.

【解析】

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