
假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。
内容包括:
推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。
介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)
参考活动: 欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera), 体验功夫(kung fu), 参加广东历史讲座等。
作文要求:
不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
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I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
满分作文1:
【分析】高分句型一:
I believe you will be attracted by its beauty.
我相信你会被它的美丽所吸引.will be attracted 一般将来时的被动语态,将会被吸引
高分句型二:
From the activieies, I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of Guangdong.
从活动中,我想你会更好地了解广东的文化.have a better understanding of …更好的了解……
【解答】Good evening,everyone.I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. We've prepraed some traditional food for you, such as shrimp dumplings,steamed pork ribs.( 两种广东传统食物:虾饺,粉蒸排骨).I wish you'll like them.As for the schedule of your activities, you'll watch a Cantonese opera in the music hall on the first day. I believe you will be attracted by its beauty. 【高分句型一】 And you are sure to feel more excited on the second day, as you will learn kungfu from a master in the gym. From the activieies, I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of Guangdong. 【高分句型二】(两项广东传统文化活动的安排:欣赏粤剧,体验功夫)I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.
满分作文2:
’ll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening.
