
1:是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1. 适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语,可以有be less impressive替换
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many. 注:用many, if not most 一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替换most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
开头和结尾的万能公式
1.开头万能公式一:
名人名言:有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?经典句型:A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that…
二结尾万能公式:
1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论
说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
更多过渡短语:
to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus
更多句型:
Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…
2.结尾万能公式二:如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型:
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken
精彩你的“强调”
英语中的强调手段是多种多样的, 以下的表示法可以精彩你的“强调”,为作文增加亮点。
一、用形容词“very”,“single”等表示强调
Red Army fought a battle on this very spot. 红军就在此地打过一仗。
Not a single person has been in the office this afternoon. 今天下午竟然没有一个人来过办公室。
二、用反身代词表示强调
I myself will see her off at the station. 我将亲自到车站为她送行。
You can do it well yourself. 你自己能做好这件事情。
三、用助词“do”表示强调
The baby is generally healthy, but every now and then she does catch a cold. 那孩子的健康状况尚好,但就是偶尔患感冒。
Do be quiet. I told you I had a headache. 务必安静,我告诉过你,我头疼。
四、用副词“very”,“only”,“even”,“too”,“just”等表示强调
He drank it to the very last drop.他把它喝得一干二净。
Only in this way can we wipe out the enemy troops. 只有用这样的方法我们才能消灭敌军。
He didn’t answer even my letter.他甚至连我的信都不回。
I will too go! 我要去的!
The scenery is just superb. 风景真是美极了。
五、用“...and that”,“...and those”,“not...too much”,“否定加否定”等结构表示强调
They fulfilled the task, and that in a few days. 他们在几天内完成的就是那项任务。
I gave her some presents, and those the day before yesterday. 前天我送给她的就是那些礼物。
I can’t thank you too much. 我无论怎样感谢你都不过份。
I am not unfaithful to you. 我对你无比忠诚。
六、用短语“in every way”,“in no way”,“by all means”,“by no means”,“only too”,“all too”,“but too”,“in heaven”,“in the world”,“in hell”,“on earth”,“under the sun”等表示强调
His behaviour was in every way perfect. 他的举止确实无可挑剔。
By all means take your son with you. 你一定要把儿子带来。
The news was only too true. 这消息确实是事实。
It was over all too soon! 此事的确了结得很快!
Where in heaven were you then?当时你到底在哪里?
Nobody under the sun would buy that car. 确实没有人会买那辆车。
七、用倒装句表示强调
Dishonest he is! 他的确不诚实!
In wine is the truth. 酒后吐真言。
八、用强调句型表示强调
It was the headmaster who opened the door for me. 正是校长为我开的门。
It was yesterday that we carried out that experiment. 就是在昨天我们做了那个实验。
口语化的或地道的语句
1. It's not like that. 不是那样的
4. Good thing... 还好,幸好…
7. There's no other way of saying it.没有别种说法
8. That will not always be the case. 情况不会永远是这样
case这个字有「情况」的意思,That will be the case.就是指「情况就会是这样了。」但是你若觉得现在的情况只会是暂时,不会长久,你就可以反过来说That will not always be the case.「情况不会永远是这样。」
12. So that explains it. 原来如此
13. I feel the same way. 我有同感。
16. come hell or high water
这个短语的使用时机是当你要去执行一项任务或是做一件事之际,只许成功不许失败的决心。 就犹如中文的「就算天崩地裂…」,比喻不论发生什么状况都要去完成使命。可以用在句首当作一句话的开头,或是放在句尾补述。
17. have something in common
have something in common是指「彼此有着共通点」,可能是嗜好,也可能是观念。若你和某人完全不对盘,丝毫没有共通点,你就可以说We have nothing in common.
19. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself. 你不该这么苛责自己的
21. When you get down to it
get down to...是指「追究出最根柢的原因」,也就是把层层的原因摊开,在抽丝剥茧之后所得到最精确最原本的那个答案。
25. This is not how it looks.
「事情不是表面看来的这样」,以说服他人不要指凭他们所看到的片面,骤下结论。
29. spare no effort
「不惜血本,不计代价」
39. Call it a day.
「到此为止,就这样结束。」Let's call it a day.「今天就到这里。」
53. There's bound to be more of them.
be bound to「一定、绝对」这个词组是此句话的精髓,相当于definitely的意思,虽然有点预测的意味,可是却有十成的把握。下次与人打赌时,自己对于答案的正确性胸有成竹的时候,便是你使用此一句型的最佳时机。
60. I'm with…on…
I'm with someone (on something)相当于另一个句型I am on one's side.「我跟某人站在一边。」I'm with you.「
65. by all means
by all means「必定、一定、无论如何」,有of course「当然」之意,通常是加强语气之用。比如人家邀请你去吃饭,你就可以说I'll come by all means.「我一定会来的。」要注意的是,by any means同样也是「一定、无论如何」之意,但是通常用在否定句之中。还有一个词组by no means,这个的意思就是「绝不」。
67. in my way of thinking
in my way of thinking就是「以我看来,就我而言」的意思。同样的意思,你也可以说as far as I'm concerned,或者简单一点的in my opinion。这都是一种谦虚表达意见的方式,在发言之前先声明这纯属个人的想法。
74. I don't mean to be rude, but...「我不是故意要……,我无意……」。
76. I wouldn't look at it like that.
「每一件事都有两面。」There are two sides of a story.而对于同一件事的看法,每个人或许都不尽相同。「我不会用这个角度来看。」以表示自己对于同一件事,持有不同的意见。
77. It's all there for a reason.
有许多的观念都是长久以来传袭下来的,诸如传统或是一些约定俗成的规章,若你觉得这些经过时间考验的规章、传统甚或观念,「自有其存在的道理」,你就可以用这句话It's all there for a reason.来表达你捍卫传统的立场。
blind alley 死胡同
You are heading into a blind alley.你正在钻牛角尖。
come easily 容易
Languages come easily to some people.有些人能够很容易地掌握语言。
Just because.(没有别的原因。)
It isn't the way I hoped it would be.(这不是我所盼望的。)
You will never guess.(你永远猜不到。)
Money is a good servant but a bad master.(要做金钱的主人,莫做金钱的奴隶。)
Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.(脑中的知识比手中的金钱更重要)
5. Probably. It's still up in the air.大概吧. 但还不确定. "It's up in the air."
"八字还没一撇呢!"
7. Do we need to hit a shower first?我们需要先洗个澡吗?
"Let's hit it." 类似的用法还有像是睡觉老美会说, hit the bed, 上路会说 hit the road. 都是蛮值得学的用法.
10. Same here.我也是.
